Different Shoes
Maybe they won't notice8 total reviews
Comment from schatzling
WOW...I just posted this art to the FanArt side and it already made it to the FanStory Side...That makes me smile out loud. I cannot thank you enough for selecting my Art to accompany your writing. They do fit so well together. I am honored to say the least, I enjoyed your writing too... WELL DONE. Thanks so much for sharing and again for selecting my art.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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WOW...I just posted this art to the FanArt side and it already made it to the FanStory Side...That makes me smile out loud. I cannot thank you enough for selecting my Art to accompany your writing. They do fit so well together. I am honored to say the least, I enjoyed your writing too... WELL DONE. Thanks so much for sharing and again for selecting my art.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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The picture was an obvious choice to accompany this. Thanks so much!
Comment from Heather Knight
I have to say I love this. It's different and original.
These two lines are so clever:
My mental Kung Fu weakens
Like a muscle overused
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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I have to say I love this. It's different and original.
These two lines are so clever:
My mental Kung Fu weakens
Like a muscle overused
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Ah, the loss of a love, and the shame of wearing two different shoes. Someone is bound to notice. There is always someone in the crowd who is a 'watcher.'
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Hi there;
Ah, the loss of a love, and the shame of wearing two different shoes. Someone is bound to notice. There is always someone in the crowd who is a 'watcher.'
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Neonewman
Mismatched shoes are in now a days my friend. I enjoyed the rhythmic slow this well crafted piece had to offer. I enjoyed the play on shoes throughout as well. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Mismatched shoes are in now a days my friend. I enjoyed the rhythmic slow this well crafted piece had to offer. I enjoyed the play on shoes throughout as well. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
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My pleasure
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks using or wearing different shoes on different days per plan and muse, about sexual relations, abruptly the pair of shoes came in mind that she wore mismatched shoes; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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This speaks using or wearing different shoes on different days per plan and muse, about sexual relations, abruptly the pair of shoes came in mind that she wore mismatched shoes; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Dude. You really should have promoted this poem. This poem stands out for many reasons. One, it is original and not like other stuff I have read lately. Two, it is damn good, it made me life and I really got into it right away.
Please keep at it, there is a place fpr you and your poetic voice and I look forward to reading everything you produce.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Dude. You really should have promoted this poem. This poem stands out for many reasons. One, it is original and not like other stuff I have read lately. Two, it is damn good, it made me life and I really got into it right away.
Please keep at it, there is a place fpr you and your poetic voice and I look forward to reading everything you produce.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Wow. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a cute poem about the effect that adoration can have on us.
The picture is well done and a very good match.
Well done, well rhymed.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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This is a cute poem about the effect that adoration can have on us.
The picture is well done and a very good match.
Well done, well rhymed.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and ranking my little poem!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have worn different earrings by mistake but I haven't quite succumbed to wearing different shoes on my feet, but give it time! This is a fun write, well rhymed and amused me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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I have worn different earrings by mistake but I haven't quite succumbed to wearing different shoes on my feet, but give it time! This is a fun write, well rhymed and amused me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and ranking my little poem!
