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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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LOL! Just like earth in the end it will be the "coocooroodth" that survives. I am trying to imagine what the offspring of these pairs will look like and it boggles the mind. This was lots of fun to read and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks, MA.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Oh my goodness Bill! This one is indeed hilarious. I can see how you entertain yourself with this kind of write. You even have the lisp correct! Awesome. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks, Kiwi.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about the precarious world of Aardvark where inhabitants plan for expanding population as solar system and space will vanish soon; well linked, expressed; I like. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks, ALD
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. This is getting more bizarre each time. Well, I do hope they can colonize the plant with whatever variety of animals they think they are!
Loved the line:
"Aardvark: I would hafth to eath mythelf."
One typo:
"I' m sorry, but " (extra space)

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thanks , Helen. Typos keep me humble (along with everything else).