Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A very earnest prayer and since it is a prayer, it is an "ode" because it addresses our Heavenly Father. It expresses love directly to God and asks in the last line for guidance.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 ode in honor of God whom you adore more than anybody knows. A protector guide He will always be for us our heavenly father.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

Lovely prayer in your 5-7-5 Ode poem. You've creatively combined a short, 22-syllable piece of work into a well-written piece that conveys a loving tribute to God. Nicely done and much luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.