I and my husband, Robert
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "I adore you, God"A prayer, then the walk through our marriage.
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Comment from A. Willow Bends
A lovely prayer said in so few words. Nicely done and creatively so with the photo. It is difficult to say much about a haiku type poem. So, let this suffice. Very nicely done. If several stanzas could be written, this would be so much easier!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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A lovely prayer said in so few words. Nicely done and creatively so with the photo. It is difficult to say much about a haiku type poem. So, let this suffice. Very nicely done. If several stanzas could be written, this would be so much easier!
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Beck Fenton
This is a nice little haiku prayer. The artwork you have chosen is a perfect choice to match the feeling you evoke with your words. May God be with you on your journey as He does know how much you love Him. God bless.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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This is a nice little haiku prayer. The artwork you have chosen is a perfect choice to match the feeling you evoke with your words. May God be with you on your journey as He does know how much you love Him. God bless.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from apky
Although this is not a rhyme,
I nevertheless enjoyed your story.
Faith is something that affects us all differently.
The truism of spirituality lives in all human since
time immemorial. Different people talk to God in
their own different voices, customs and traditions.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Although this is not a rhyme,
I nevertheless enjoyed your story.
Faith is something that affects us all differently.
The truism of spirituality lives in all human since
time immemorial. Different people talk to God in
their own different voices, customs and traditions.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Robina, I am not at all surprised this won the contest -what a sweet ode in the 5-7-5 format. I don't see how it could be any better (and I feel the very same as this poem says, so you know it resonates with me)!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Oh, Robina, I am not at all surprised this won the contest -what a sweet ode in the 5-7-5 format. I don't see how it could be any better (and I feel the very same as this poem says, so you know it resonates with me)!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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It was my pleasure, Ine.
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello ROBINA 1978: I admire your poem because it conforms to God's greatest commandment: I found this commandment in my Holy Bible @ : MATTHEW 22:36-40.
You are walking on the right path, ROBINA. Stay on it. Keep your faith in, Jesus. You'll be glad that you did. God bless you. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Hello ROBINA 1978: I admire your poem because it conforms to God's greatest commandment: I found this commandment in my Holy Bible @ : MATTHEW 22:36-40.
You are walking on the right path, ROBINA. Stay on it. Keep your faith in, Jesus. You'll be glad that you did. God bless you. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Swampfox1
I saw possiblites for rhyme in there but you chose not to and that is very fine with me, but I like it and it seems to do the job. Certainly it must have done the job for I see it won a contest. Congratulations.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I saw possiblites for rhyme in there but you chose not to and that is very fine with me, but I like it and it seems to do the job. Certainly it must have done the job for I see it won a contest. Congratulations.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I don't go to church every week, I work every other and then we have plans on our weekends off etc, so people don't realize I go. People also don't realize how much I like going to church stuff because again I don't go that often. But they will never understand the relationship I have with God. I totally get it.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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I don't go to church every week, I work every other and then we have plans on our weekends off etc, so people don't realize I go. People also don't realize how much I like going to church stuff because again I don't go that often. But they will never understand the relationship I have with God. I totally get it.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Sherman541
Very nice statement for your 5/7/5 and so beautiful it won, I see. Congratulations!! The visual if very worthy of the poem the two meld together nicely. Sherman541
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Very nice statement for your 5/7/5 and so beautiful it won, I see. Congratulations!! The visual if very worthy of the poem the two meld together nicely. Sherman541
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.
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You are welcome :)
Comment from jaded831
My heart began to soar reading your words. They reflect my own. Faith plays a very large part of my world, I can not imagine a life without my faith. God guides my every move, in turn, He fills me with peace.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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My heart began to soar reading your words. They reflect my own. Faith plays a very large part of my world, I can not imagine a life without my faith. God guides my every move, in turn, He fills me with peace.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.
Comment from RodG
A very nice ode praising God and declaring your love and devotion to Him. Yes, only God who is omniscient would know how much you love Him. A worthy winner of this contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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A very nice ode praising God and declaring your love and devotion to Him. Yes, only God who is omniscient would know how much you love Him. A worthy winner of this contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.
