Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Ode 5-7-5 writing prompt.
It has a good message and the picture is a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Ellie707

Excellent

I like the picture - very apropos.

The skillful use of the adjectives and nouns is phenomenal. A powerful statement summed up in twelve words. Powerful.

Good job.

Ellie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by Ellie707 on 06-Dec-2017

reply by Ellie707 on 06-Dec-2017

You're welcome!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These words are clever and a great entry for the contest, few words that say so much, truth always seems to survive lies as we all yearn to get to the truth, nicely done, I wish you luck, you hav my vote, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya