The Path Foreseen
An unusual blindspot2 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Poet: You have demonstrated witty imagery here. I like your drift. You've made me recall a true saying that I've encountered many times before I read your art. This saying is what your art has paraphrased: "If I can't see it... before I see it...I won't ever see it."
This is extremely witty to me. Write some more of this. Keep this in sight. The more of this that you write, the more clever people will bite. Thank you, clever-ever. Truly yours: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Hello Poet: You have demonstrated witty imagery here. I like your drift. You've made me recall a true saying that I've encountered many times before I read your art. This saying is what your art has paraphrased: "If I can't see it... before I see it...I won't ever see it."
This is extremely witty to me. Write some more of this. Keep this in sight. The more of this that you write, the more clever people will bite. Thank you, clever-ever. Truly yours: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Wow! I am surprised. I was unaware of this saying you quote and yes this poem mirrors its sentiment.
Thank you for your encouraging words.
Eugene
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this poem is a good entry for the 2-9-2 writing prompt.
Well written with a good message in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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I think this poem is a good entry for the 2-9-2 writing prompt.
Well written with a good message in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Sharon
Thank you for your review. I really appreciate your comments.
Eugene
