Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good poem for the Ten Word Poem contest.
And the picture fits nicely. Very cute.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.

Sharon

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the review

Comment from Dan Diego

Excellent

Frosty's lament. For me, this is topical, timely, and humorous. The notion of sunscreen on a snowman made me smile. If this is a contest entry, you might consider a period at the end.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Thank you for the read and the period idea. I will edit.

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

Adorable and funny - you've created a very worthy entry for the 10-Word contest! The artwork is perfect and tells a complete tale of the poor melting snowman who forgot his sun-screen! LOL - love it! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Thank you for the read and your kind comments.