A Lifetime of Love
True Love never dies28 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your presentation and artwork selection. Your use of mono-verse rhyme intensifies the impact of your message about love. Well done! --Joan
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I admired your presentation and artwork selection. Your use of mono-verse rhyme intensifies the impact of your message about love. Well done! --Joan
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Ulla
Hi Kaphot, a lovely little poem about everlasting love. A love that will always endure. I'glad jungle fighter could inspire you. Your words meant a lot to me. All the best. Ulla:))
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Hi Kaphot, a lovely little poem about everlasting love. A love that will always endure. I'glad jungle fighter could inspire you. Your words meant a lot to me. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from zekeziemann
Your explanation at the end of the post is very good and gives the reader the reasons for writing. Well done and Merry Christmas.
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Your explanation at the end of the post is very good and gives the reader the reasons for writing. Well done and Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot, A lifetime of love described in twelve syllables from birth to death. Good rhyme maintained and very well displayed. Interesting poem. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hi Kahpot, A lifetime of love described in twelve syllables from birth to death. Good rhyme maintained and very well displayed. Interesting poem. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from JennaG
Really well done! I like this exploration of life and love. Your rhyming is skillful and your message powerful. True love is a very precious thing. I really enjoyed this piece! :)
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Really well done! I like this exploration of life and love. Your rhyming is skillful and your message powerful. True love is a very precious thing. I really enjoyed this piece! :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from johnwilson
Somehow, you were able to define love in its 3 stages. I commend you, because I'm a wordy writer, and it's difficult for me to get my point across so succinctly. You showed me something new today.
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Somehow, you were able to define love in its 3 stages. I commend you, because I'm a wordy writer, and it's difficult for me to get my point across so succinctly. You showed me something new today.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, and I am glad you enjoyed it****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
Very difficult to define love, but here you have three stages in which love is connected, and reading the poem over, it's the only way I could connect with it.
1 Found as new
2 Constant in life
3 With death , bound
...for love sustains after death.
Good work.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Very difficult to define love, but here you have three stages in which love is connected, and reading the poem over, it's the only way I could connect with it.
1 Found as new
2 Constant in life
3 With death , bound
...for love sustains after death.
Good work.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
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Exactly and thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from victor 66
"Love is what makes the world go round". I find it hard to believe that for every person, there isn't someone or something that gives them that special feeling. If he or she doesn't have someone or something that lifts them up, where else can they go, but down. Thank you for sharing.
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"Love is what makes the world go round". I find it hard to believe that for every person, there isn't someone or something that gives them that special feeling. If he or she doesn't have someone or something that lifts them up, where else can they go, but down. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes I think there is someone for every body****kahpot
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You are most welcome, Kahpot.
Comment from Bill Schott
This short romance poem, A Lifetime of Love, reduces the sentiments that wax on for pages, to these few apt phrases. We are born, find someone, live our lives, cement our relationships, and finally move on. Love remains. Nice.
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This short romance poem, A Lifetime of Love, reduces the sentiments that wax on for pages, to these few apt phrases. We are born, find someone, live our lives, cement our relationships, and finally move on. Love remains. Nice.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Liberty Justice
Yes, love forever seems that lovers are bound to love forever as long as they live. Such dedication and longing and commitment toward each other. Nicely worded poem. NICE. truly, liberty justice
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Yes, love forever seems that lovers are bound to love forever as long as they live. Such dedication and longing and commitment toward each other. Nicely worded poem. NICE. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
