Breath of God
Autumn Clouds12 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Brigitte. Congratulations on winning the contest with this fine entry. Your father's painting is gorgeous. How wonderful that his work is exhibited. When I lived in New York, I visited the Metropolitan many times. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Hi Brigitte. Congratulations on winning the contest with this fine entry. Your father's painting is gorgeous. How wonderful that his work is exhibited. When I lived in New York, I visited the Metropolitan many times. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much. I was pleasantly surprised, had never fared well in contests before.
Glad you liked the painting.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Ricky1024
Hi Bridget you don't look a day over 51 by the way and your father's picture is quite amazing also as your home your 575 with the she goes flying through the clouds that would be your theme and imagery ejective content of course is to win the contest and the object to that is to use your father's artwork it read well flowed well with no grammar issues the descriptive measures were perfect in in place thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi Bridget you don't look a day over 51 by the way and your father's picture is quite amazing also as your home your 575 with the she goes flying through the clouds that would be your theme and imagery ejective content of course is to win the contest and the object to that is to use your father's artwork it read well flowed well with no grammar issues the descriptive measures were perfect in in place thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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I am grateful for the time you took to read and review. This is the first time one of my submissions ever won a contest. Glad you got the imagery from the words and picture.
Have a great Sunday,
Brigitte
Comment from RGstar
What a lovely write.
I looked at the image and your words came to life. Not surprised it won the competition.
A very well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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What a lovely write.
I looked at the image and your words came to life. Not surprised it won the competition.
A very well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review. This is the first time ever winning a contest and feel honored. I thank the readers from the bottom of my heart for this support and for voting for this entry.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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Lovely write, dear Brigitte, you deserve it. Keep writing, there will be more. :)
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I am overwhelmed by your encouragement.
Have a great weekend.
Brigitte
Comment from patcelaw
This is a great 575 poem about autumn. I love the art that was done by your father. There is something very majestic about clouds and the geese flying in the clouds. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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This is a great 575 poem about autumn. I love the art that was done by your father. There is something very majestic about clouds and the geese flying in the clouds. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and your kind comments. The painting hangs in living room and I love it.
Have a great weekend,
Brigitte
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to Autumn. The puffy clouds remind of God's breath he blows down to earth in Autumn to remind us that winter will soon be here to complete the seasonal cycle.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to Autumn. The puffy clouds remind of God's breath he blows down to earth in Autumn to remind us that winter will soon be here to complete the seasonal cycle.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading.
Have a great weekend.
Brigitte
Comment from lyenochka
The painting is wonderful and so is your ekphrastic poem using the breathtaking view of the gulls among the "mighty autumn day clouds." I also like the last line which hints at the coming winter.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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The painting is wonderful and so is your ekphrastic poem using the breathtaking view of the gulls among the "mighty autumn day clouds." I also like the last line which hints at the coming winter.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you for this review and supportive comments.
Have a great weekend.
Brigitte
Comment from Liberty Justice
WOW! What amazing photo. You just got a thumbs up that launched you upward by yourself, so hope you keep it. Looks like could be "the Breath of God," and that photo looks like someone or some being breathing. The clouds so puffy and white feels like wind is blowing right through them. Powerful metaphors. truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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WOW! What amazing photo. You just got a thumbs up that launched you upward by yourself, so hope you keep it. Looks like could be "the Breath of God," and that photo looks like someone or some being breathing. The clouds so puffy and white feels like wind is blowing right through them. Powerful metaphors. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you for this wonderful review and reading. Glad you liked the painting.
Have a great weekend.
Brigitte
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and the poem is a nice change from the orange ones.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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This is a lovely entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and the poem is a nice change from the orange ones.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I thank you for reading and the supportive comments. I am glad that you liked this entry.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello poet: Compare: GENESIS 2 : 7. And the Lord God formed man of the dust of the ground, and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life; and man became a living being.
I'm glad about that. Seems as though, you are too. The breath of our God is the reason for every season. Which makes your poem, right exact. This work is testimony for our God.
I just want to say that you and I are on the same page in the Holy Scriptures. For us, beloved,
it all started (life) with the breath of our God. Keep up your good work. We need it
Thank you: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Hello poet: Compare: GENESIS 2 : 7. And the Lord God formed man of the dust of the ground, and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life; and man became a living being.
I'm glad about that. Seems as though, you are too. The breath of our God is the reason for every season. Which makes your poem, right exact. This work is testimony for our God.
I just want to say that you and I are on the same page in the Holy Scriptures. For us, beloved,
it all started (life) with the breath of our God. Keep up your good work. We need it
Thank you: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I am overwhelmed at this insightful and inspiring review. Yes, this is a testimonial to our Almighty from whom we received life and should therefore nurture all the beauty and goodness offered by and through him. Thank you for joining me in the spirit of praise. Thank you so very much for these beautiful comments. Faith inspired, I will continue to write.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes winter creeps into our bones without us noticing as Autumn prepares the way! I liked the line 'spewing breath of God' Good luck with the contest, Best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Yes winter creeps into our bones without us noticing as Autumn prepares the way! I liked the line 'spewing breath of God' Good luck with the contest, Best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you much for these kind and gentle comments. I appreciate you being a loyal fan.
Hugs,
Brigitte
