Mirror, Mirror
What's in you I see?14 total reviews
Comment from For better for verse
Enjoyed your poem, thought it was well crafted with good rhyme. Have a few mirrors like this myself.
Great job and a worthy contest entry.......good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Enjoyed your poem, thought it was well crafted with good rhyme. Have a few mirrors like this myself.
Great job and a worthy contest entry.......good luck.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you so very much for the great review and wonderful comments! It was a fun one to write and am so happy that you enjoyed! Have a lovely week!
Comment from Lucian Carter
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Lovely. I'll admit I'm aging gracefully, But the white hairs on the barber's smock seem more common every time.
This is a great poem in style as well. It flows. The rhymes all work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Lovely. I'll admit I'm aging gracefully, But the white hairs on the barber's smock seem more common every time.
This is a great poem in style as well. It flows. The rhymes all work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thanks so much for the great review and comments! So glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Mirror, Mirror, is a hoot and reminds us all, I'm sure, that the mirror hides nothing but our self-image. Fun poem to read. I have a mirror like that one too.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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This poem, Mirror, Mirror, is a hoot and reminds us all, I'm sure, that the mirror hides nothing but our self-image. Fun poem to read. I have a mirror like that one too.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hi, Bill! Thanks so much for the great review - so happy you enjoyed! Have a grand week!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha...
Yeah, we wish it was just a defective mirror causing that "stranger" to appear in our mirrors, don't we?
Very well rhymed, and funny, too!
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hahahaha...
Yeah, we wish it was just a defective mirror causing that "stranger" to appear in our mirrors, don't we?
Very well rhymed, and funny, too!
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hi, Dean! Thank you so much for the great review and fun comments! So glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely and is quite the fun read against so many somber entries. The rhyme and meter are solid throughout and the content witty. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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This meets the contest requirements nicely and is quite the fun read against so many somber entries. The rhyme and meter are solid throughout and the content witty. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thanks so much for the great review and comments! Although looking in the mirror at my age does seem to conjure up a "horror" scene, still can't let the fun in it go by! LOL! And thanks again for the great review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about what the mirror tells us bus not necessarily what we like to see or hoped for. The one we look for seems to have disappeared in thin air.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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A very well-written poem about what the mirror tells us bus not necessarily what we like to see or hoped for. The one we look for seems to have disappeared in thin air.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi, Sandra! Thank you so very much for the great review and comments! I am so happy that you enjoyed! Have a wonderful week - can't believe we're so close to Christmas!
Comment from Elizabeth Brown
I loved this and smiled all the way through reading it. The rhyming is very good and each line flows well. I think that as the story unfolds we can relate to it and I believe it may be a familiar one to many. Good picture too!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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I loved this and smiled all the way through reading it. The rhyming is very good and each line flows well. I think that as the story unfolds we can relate to it and I believe it may be a familiar one to many. Good picture too!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi, Elizabeth! Thank you so very much for the great review and wonderful comments! It's so true, at one time or another I think we can definitely relate! Have a wonderful week and thanks again for the 5 star review!
Comment from Joy Graham
This is great fun, and a fantastic contest entry :) You have fun meter throughout that sings this poem along. There's just enough rhyming to satisfy this old rhyme lover. I think you have a contender in the contest. Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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This is great fun, and a fantastic contest entry :) You have fun meter throughout that sings this poem along. There's just enough rhyming to satisfy this old rhyme lover. I think you have a contender in the contest. Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi, Joy! Thank you so much for the wonderful review and comments! Have a beautiful day!
Comment from marybell1
I just have to give you six stars. 1. because I sampathise with you and
2. I enjoy a jolly good laugh. You told the story and you rhymed it well.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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I just have to give you six stars. 1. because I sampathise with you and
2. I enjoy a jolly good laugh. You told the story and you rhymed it well.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Hi, Marybell! Thank you so, so much for the wonderful review and comments! I'm so happy that this one gave you a good laugh - exactly what I was hoping for! Thank you again and have a wonderful day!
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It was fun and you are m,most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from BeasPeas
Ha, ha! Well, you and I better stop shopping at Walmart because I seem to have the same problem with my mirror. Your piece gave me giggles but at least they will leave laugh lines. Your poem is cute and funny all the way through with great rhyming and word choices. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Ha, ha! Well, you and I better stop shopping at Walmart because I seem to have the same problem with my mirror. Your piece gave me giggles but at least they will leave laugh lines. Your poem is cute and funny all the way through with great rhyming and word choices. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thanks so much for the great review, Marilyn! Love your comments! I couldn't resist using "Wal-Mart" as the scapegoat for this one! Thanks again and have a wonderful weekend!
