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Grumpy in the Morning

Flash Fiction Contest Entry

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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Mom is quite a kidder, isn't she?

Funny that now we all have cell phones, it's harder and harder to pull phone pranks. That caller ID will get you every time! haha.

Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your comments and compliment, Rhonda. There still are folks out there, like the three in my piece, that never joined the cell phone majority. Good old land line lubbers.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 30-Nov-2017
    Too funny. My mother-in-law just ditched her land line not too long ago.
Comment from Mimi Linny
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Funny fiction piece about strange morning phone call with mom! Liked the grumpiness of the interaction and use of all required words blended right into the story with ease. Great summary line: "My Mom's a kidder!" Nicely done and much luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging comments, Mimi.