Ode to Getting a Good Night's Sleep
Can you tell the book from my covers?3 total reviews
Comment from mmonaghan777
Really good one! How true. So your wife hasn't figured it out yet or did she get to read this poem. The truth is out. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
Really good one! How true. So your wife hasn't figured it out yet or did she get to read this poem. The truth is out. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
Thank you for your nice review! I won this one! What a rush! I am still trying to learn how this place works because I won this contest and the same day my "Poet Ranking " dropped! I also must apologize as I have no coins to pass for a great review because, as I understand it, I have to earn those coins by giving reviews, can't buy 'em. But, I am so new to this, that I have not felt qualified to review anything. Any ideas?
Comment from Ricky1024
This is an ode poem based on Grief and lack of ability to sleep it was well written flowed well and had great descriptive measures theme and imagery there was no grammar issues thanks for this text to Ricky
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
This is an ode poem based on Grief and lack of ability to sleep it was well written flowed well and had great descriptive measures theme and imagery there was no grammar issues thanks for this text to Ricky
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your nice review! I won this one! What a rush! I am still trying to learn how this place works because I won this contest and the same day my "Poet Ranking " dropped! I also must apologize as I have no coins to pass for a great review because, as I understand it, I have to earn those coins by giving reviews, can't buy 'em. But, I am so new to this, that I have not felt qualified to review anything. Any ideas?
Comment from Mabaker
Oh heck, books have been labeled so many things. Great, exciting, sad, moving, time-wasters, unhappy and so many more, but never have I heard one referred to as a sleeping aid. Great poem. I enjoyed it Sincerely Mabaker
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
Oh heck, books have been labeled so many things. Great, exciting, sad, moving, time-wasters, unhappy and so many more, but never have I heard one referred to as a sleeping aid. Great poem. I enjoyed it Sincerely Mabaker
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your nice review! I won this one! What a rush! I am still trying to learn how this place works because I won this contest and the same day my "Poet Ranking " dropped! I also must apologize as I have no coins to pass for a great review because, as I understand it, I have to earn those coins by giving reviews, can't buy 'em. But, I am so new to this, that I have not felt qualified to review anything. Any ideas?
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