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haiku (wave)

simple wave begets disaster

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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A good entry for the Nature haiku writing prompt.
The picture and the poem are a perfect match and tell a strong story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks for reading and responding.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I'm so glad to see that those who are writing haiku poetry here lately have not bought in to the false assumption that haiku poetry must be exactly seventeen syllables, Elaine.
Your haiku displays good word economy as well.
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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks for reading my work. I always enjoy your excellent work. Thanks, elaine
reply by Dean Kuch on 07-Dec-2017
    Anytime, Elaine.
    ~D