~ Simple Pleasures ~
ABC Poem - (2nd Place)19 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a very flowing poem using internal rhyme that describes the beauty and peace nature brings us and intertwines it with the peace and hope we can bring to ourselves and others by giving.
Congrats of placing second in the contest. Keep writing
Happy Holidays
dp
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
  |
This is a very flowing poem using internal rhyme that describes the beauty and peace nature brings us and intertwines it with the peace and hope we can bring to ourselves and others by giving.
Congrats of placing second in the contest. Keep writing
Happy Holidays
dp
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
-
Dragonpoet, thank you very much for popping in to review my ABC poem and for your contest wishes. I?m very honored. ~DD
-
You are so very welcome.
dp
Comment from Liberty Justice
What a darling little bird, and such an amazing poem about love and giving. I believe pets bless our lives, and that we receive blessings when we care for animals properly--feed them, give shelter, and fresh water. BEAUTIFUL! Truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
What a darling little bird, and such an amazing poem about love and giving. I believe pets bless our lives, and that we receive blessings when we care for animals properly--feed them, give shelter, and fresh water. BEAUTIFUL! Truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Thank you Liberty Justice. Your comments on my ABC poem are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very pleasant ABC poem. An idea came to mind as I read the first line: why not change basking to busking, a word that implies solo singing in a public? Just a thought.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
This is a very pleasant ABC poem. An idea came to mind as I read the first line: why not change basking to busking, a word that implies solo singing in a public? Just a thought.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Pantygynt, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and suggestion are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Poems of DD What a nice poem to read and your words really reflect the simple pleasures which are the best ones . Birds singing and morning dew, rainbows and nice acts are all proceless. A lovely poem Good luck in the contest . Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Hi Poems of DD What a nice poem to read and your words really reflect the simple pleasures which are the best ones . Birds singing and morning dew, rainbows and nice acts are all proceless. A lovely poem Good luck in the contest . Cheers Christine
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Chrissy, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from sunnilicious
That poem came out great. Well thought out and clearly written. Good alliterations through out the piece. It all works together nicely. Good wisdom. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
That poem came out great. Well thought out and clearly written. Good alliterations through out the piece. It all works together nicely. Good wisdom. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Sunnilicious, thank you for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem. When we look around us there are many simple things we can find to enjoy. The birds on a fresh morning, the first rays of the sun and the multi-color rainbow.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
|
A very well-written ABC poem. When we look around us there are many simple things we can find to enjoy. The birds on a fresh morning, the first rays of the sun and the multi-color rainbow.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
Sandra, thank you for taking the time to review my ABC poem. It is much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from rama devi
I enjoyed this a lot! Musical and visually lovely too. Excellent internal rhyming. Excellent flow with the long lines. I especially enjoyed the first line with its alliteration of S, B and W:
Ahh, the sweet singing sound of a basking bird, in tune with the wind to be vibrantly heard.
Inspiring line (LOVE IT!):
Charitable acts of thoughtful giving making me humble and appreciate living.
I like the personificaiton of the rainbow arc.
the last line has a cliche (counting lucky stars) which weakens it slightly. Further, I recommend a comma (it is grammatical when a conjunction (AND) is followed by an independent clause:
Each day I count my lucky stars...I do, because life is simple(,) and the pleasures are too.
This should prove a strong contender. Lovely presentation, uplifting message, eloquent delivery. bravo and good luck
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
|
I enjoyed this a lot! Musical and visually lovely too. Excellent internal rhyming. Excellent flow with the long lines. I especially enjoyed the first line with its alliteration of S, B and W:
Ahh, the sweet singing sound of a basking bird, in tune with the wind to be vibrantly heard.
Inspiring line (LOVE IT!):
Charitable acts of thoughtful giving making me humble and appreciate living.
I like the personificaiton of the rainbow arc.
the last line has a cliche (counting lucky stars) which weakens it slightly. Further, I recommend a comma (it is grammatical when a conjunction (AND) is followed by an independent clause:
Each day I count my lucky stars...I do, because life is simple(,) and the pleasures are too.
This should prove a strong contender. Lovely presentation, uplifting message, eloquent delivery. bravo and good luck
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
Thank you RD, I really enjoyed reading your review on my ABC poem. I appreciate the heads up on the (,) - can't believe I missed that one. Your constructive comments are always very much appreciated. ~DDxx
-
Thanks for your gracious response dear DD. Best, rd
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely poem, DD. Worded so well with mid and end-line rhyming. Beautifully illustrated and with a great message. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
|
This is a lovely poem, DD. Worded so well with mid and end-line rhyming. Beautifully illustrated and with a great message. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
-
Thanks for the review Marilyn. Much appreciated as always. ~DD
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, DD
= Indeed, once we work through adversity, we can enjoy our joy in abundance.
= Wonderful poem for the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
|
Hi, DD
= Indeed, once we work through adversity, we can enjoy our joy in abundance.
= Wonderful poem for the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers, J
*** Happy Holidays ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
-
Jax, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I really like the image,
as well as the coordinating font.
-Good imagery and use of internal rhyme.
-I like how you intersperse nature with
your appreciation of life.
-This is a well penned poem, DD,
that is a winner in my opinion!
-Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
 |
-I really like the image,
as well as the coordinating font.
-Good imagery and use of internal rhyme.
-I like how you intersperse nature with
your appreciation of life.
-This is a well penned poem, DD,
that is a winner in my opinion!
-Good luck.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
Pam, thank you so very much for your most encouraging review and your sparkly six stars. I'm very grateful and appreciate your comment on the last line - I have tweaked it as it wasn't 100% sitting fine with me. Thank you again. ~DD
-
You are very welcome and deserving of the stars, review, and comment on the last line. It is better, and your review now reflects that. Good luck!
