The fruit of passion
ones deep interest5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned with very good descriptive wording and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I did not see any spag. Blessings, Teri
This is a very well written poem you have penned with very good descriptive wording and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I did not see any spag. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ripe and juicy is hard to resist and plucking the desired fruit is the path to paradise or hell, depending on the union, but the fruit is picked anyway, food for thought here, love Dolly x
Ripe and juicy is hard to resist and plucking the desired fruit is the path to paradise or hell, depending on the union, but the fruit is picked anyway, food for thought here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This has a good sharing of feeling the joy and satisfaction, as one sows so one reaps, of the passion's fruition in the gardens, all seems paradise after the smell and colours flow over; happy about fruits; I liked.
This has a good sharing of feeling the joy and satisfaction, as one sows so one reaps, of the passion's fruition in the gardens, all seems paradise after the smell and colours flow over; happy about fruits; I liked.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A very well crafted and delightful poem, you may be a rookie but you show a lot of promise. I liked and enjoyed this poem very much,you use clever metaphor and references and interesting turns of phrase. Well done an excellent piece of work, keep writing you have talent for sure ! kindest regards Meia xx
A very well crafted and delightful poem, you may be a rookie but you show a lot of promise. I liked and enjoyed this poem very much,you use clever metaphor and references and interesting turns of phrase. Well done an excellent piece of work, keep writing you have talent for sure ! kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A pretty good effort.
The rhyming that is there is good.
Myself, I would change the first sentence:
'There takes roots' I would say 'root' no plural.
Otherwise, well done.
Sharon
A pretty good effort.
The rhyming that is there is good.
Myself, I would change the first sentence:
'There takes roots' I would say 'root' no plural.
Otherwise, well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017