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Comment from closetpoetjester
Don't search for the angels on earth for they will seek and be drawn to you Michael.
But time is short, so bare your soul through blessed hurricane and you shall be victorious in life everlasting...AND be in the company of angels.
Great theory huh? LOL
I LOVE your poetry.
AND your opinions. For they are like bottoms and everyone rightfully has one, good, bad or indifferent.
Sassy
xx
PS I ALWAYS have to read your stuff two or three times and often come up with a multitude of thoughts and meanings behind your gifted verse.
Fancy that!
Not many here that can hold my attention for THAT long haha
*dainty clap*
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Don't search for the angels on earth for they will seek and be drawn to you Michael.
But time is short, so bare your soul through blessed hurricane and you shall be victorious in life everlasting...AND be in the company of angels.
Great theory huh? LOL
I LOVE your poetry.
AND your opinions. For they are like bottoms and everyone rightfully has one, good, bad or indifferent.
Sassy
xx
PS I ALWAYS have to read your stuff two or three times and often come up with a multitude of thoughts and meanings behind your gifted verse.
Fancy that!
Not many here that can hold my attention for THAT long haha
*dainty clap*
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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you know I dated a women not long ago who felt about my smell
as you do my "poetry"....swore it has some kind of musk aroma
I've since realized from both hidden sniffing and complaining to a friend....
that their are many who pay big money for my smell. so something to think about
kept me up all night with a can of cinnamin spritzer recently ...-headtilt-....
are you sure you want me back...I'm always Michael
Darling, DIDN'T you know we choose our mate FROM their smell.
I'll tell ya bout it sometime...
S'all in the science.
COURSE I want you back Landscaping Man
LOL
BTW I love cinnamon LOL
X
Comment from Ricky1024
Hey Michael long time no see you as a friend request you to get back in with your work so you have been sending it to me but I have this was another well-written as well as deep pieces all you're welcome thanks for this and you have a wonderful 2018 talk to Ricky 1024
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Hey Michael long time no see you as a friend request you to get back in with your work so you have been sending it to me but I have this was another well-written as well as deep pieces all you're welcome thanks for this and you have a wonderful 2018 talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
Comment from MissMerri
Thank you for sharing with us this beautiful song, "It Is Well," which is the perfect backdrop for the words of your own beautiful song of praise. I know you've suffered some devastating blows in your life, but like Job in the Bible, you continue to find your strength in God and to believe in His everlasting love. That's loyalty. He is faithful as well. We can count on that and I felt this poem was a testimony of your deepest belief in the goodness of God. As so often happens, I read your poetry with tear-blurred eyes, and find it emotionally evocative and intellectually stimulating. I have to read it more than once. There is so much tucked in between the words that can be easily missed the first time through... little gems of wisdom and wit that are most intriguing. I loved this one especially. ~ Meadow
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you for sharing with us this beautiful song, "It Is Well," which is the perfect backdrop for the words of your own beautiful song of praise. I know you've suffered some devastating blows in your life, but like Job in the Bible, you continue to find your strength in God and to believe in His everlasting love. That's loyalty. He is faithful as well. We can count on that and I felt this poem was a testimony of your deepest belief in the goodness of God. As so often happens, I read your poetry with tear-blurred eyes, and find it emotionally evocative and intellectually stimulating. I have to read it more than once. There is so much tucked in between the words that can be easily missed the first time through... little gems of wisdom and wit that are most intriguing. I loved this one especially. ~ Meadow
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you ....... for reminding me. I️ am no victim but the son of the King . I will run my race knowing the greatest reward is found at the finish line and just being included is first place. Big love for you. Always michael
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello
When I read your last stanza
victorious is sand under the triumphant stand
and no leviathan larger than Life everlasting can
be loyalty won
it brought a question into my mind if the true essence of a pearl can turn love into grains of sand can they create a perfect pearl?
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Hello
When I read your last stanza
victorious is sand under the triumphant stand
and no leviathan larger than Life everlasting can
be loyalty won
it brought a question into my mind if the true essence of a pearl can turn love into grains of sand can they create a perfect pearl?
Gert
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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My last stanza suggests victory in Christ is found at the finish line of human race unlike I?ve heard some suggest it is from the moment He is known to be....you see even demons know He is and tremble in His presents ....it goes on to state that love is proven iby loyalty....and no other thing sets precidents above first Love....He who loved me first.only thing i know about pearls Gert is not to offer them to pigs....smile....I?m always michael
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You are welcome Michael and thank you for explaining your last stanza suggests.
Gert
Comment from RGstar
Essences of truth here, my brother...from Mother and innocence and the anguish and yearning depicted here, you once again bring emotions to the fore. Not to understand, is not to discount...and I always understand you, my friend, for we speak the same language, only in different tongues.
My best.
Bravo.
RG
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Essences of truth here, my brother...from Mother and innocence and the anguish and yearning depicted here, you once again bring emotions to the fore. Not to understand, is not to discount...and I always understand you, my friend, for we speak the same language, only in different tongues.
My best.
Bravo.
RG
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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I've read Job a number of times...each showed me something new.
I saw his loyalty equaled love the last time. I think maybe its the bad things...disappointments, devastation not yet understood that prove us. loyal in Love or not. Yes...I know you've wrestled the Angel.. love you Brother. always Michael
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your dramatic presentation and your capturing the evocative contrasts of "cliffs and abyss" of "first love's intimacy". Your alliteration of "l's" in the final stanza adds to the intensity as well. Cheers and happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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I admired your dramatic presentation and your capturing the evocative contrasts of "cliffs and abyss" of "first love's intimacy". Your alliteration of "l's" in the final stanza adds to the intensity as well. Cheers and happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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yea...you should a seen me at sixteen.
I had a long mane of Adonnis hair back then
and cutest lil cupid grin...make you wanna just reach out tweak my cheek...
go ahead...I dont care....-smile-...I'm always Michael
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Many tweaks--maybe, you should grow your hair long--Adonis is hard to resist! Have a serene Sunday- Joan
Comment from Paul Bownas
I am afraid I am one of the old Rhyming poets, and I have some difficulty following more modern poetry. I apologise if that makes me the wrong type of critic for your poem. I wonder if this is a story of your own experiences. I feel that you definitely have a talent and urge you to keep writing and if you have to, ignore old fogies like me, who probably don't really know what they're talking about anyway!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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I am afraid I am one of the old Rhyming poets, and I have some difficulty following more modern poetry. I apologise if that makes me the wrong type of critic for your poem. I wonder if this is a story of your own experiences. I feel that you definitely have a talent and urge you to keep writing and if you have to, ignore old fogies like me, who probably don't really know what they're talking about anyway!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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ha..well I suppose.apologies shadow some.
I'm an old "rhymer" too....I just do with an other than dot to dot memorization.
I never painted by numbers either it confines me...and I get crazy.
so instead I found my own natural rhythm thats suits me ...because I'm not you. I'm always Michael
