See the light
End the tension24 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem. We will fight for freedom in many ways before we actually realize it comes from within ourselves. There are no place else we can find real freedom.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
A very well-written six-word poem. We will fight for freedom in many ways before we actually realize it comes from within ourselves. There are no place else we can find real freedom.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from jaded831
A very powerful six word poem. Freedom never comes easy, those attack it, who knows why. But life without freedom is a stifled. I am greatful everyday to be living in a free country. God bless America.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
A very powerful six word poem. Freedom never comes easy, those attack it, who knows why. But life without freedom is a stifled. I am greatful everyday to be living in a free country. God bless America.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well to answer your own question Kahpot:
"Freedom is yielding under constant battle"
This sure seems like a good start to me. Happy New Year my friend! xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
Well to answer your own question Kahpot:
"Freedom is yielding under constant battle"
This sure seems like a good start to me. Happy New Year my friend! xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from DR DIP
Freedom is yielding under constant battle.
I always copy and paste these poems so I can interpret as I write.
Although only 6 words they have so much meaning.
While ever there is conflict and war freedom will never win and will yield or give in to this battle.
dip
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
Freedom is yielding under constant battle.
I always copy and paste these poems so I can interpret as I write.
Although only 6 words they have so much meaning.
While ever there is conflict and war freedom will never win and will yield or give in to this battle.
dip
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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What a wonderful review many thanks, and Happy New year****kahpot