See the light
End the tension24 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a fantastic six word entry, my friend, very cool picture to compliment it.
Good luck to you. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This is a fantastic six word entry, my friend, very cool picture to compliment it.
Good luck to you. ~Kerry
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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very welcome:)
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is a powerful six word poem. This author did an outstanding job delivering a great relevant message. For the contest, this is a wonderful and significant entry. The picture selected is complimentary. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This is a powerful six word poem. This author did an outstanding job delivering a great relevant message. For the contest, this is a wonderful and significant entry. The picture selected is complimentary. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
This is an excellent entry for the contest. You did well with the six words, one line form. And yes, freedom always linger but humans constantly make war. Your theme is a good one for a poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This is an excellent entry for the contest. You did well with the six words, one line form. And yes, freedom always linger but humans constantly make war. Your theme is a good one for a poem.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Zue65
I salute poets like you who can pack such a strong message in to few words. And you were very effective in carrying out your message for the readers. Yes, I agree, we sacrifice freedom with the aggressive tension and conflict among different warring factions. In the end, the nation is the ultimate victim. All the best.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I salute poets like you who can pack such a strong message in to few words. And you were very effective in carrying out your message for the readers. Yes, I agree, we sacrifice freedom with the aggressive tension and conflict among different warring factions. In the end, the nation is the ultimate victim. All the best.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This six word poetry contest entry speaks what is freedom and how one attains in course of living and it is well expressed; wish you good luck in the contest. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This six word poetry contest entry speaks what is freedom and how one attains in course of living and it is well expressed; wish you good luck in the contest. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting choice of 6 words with freedom coming as a result of yielding. At first read, freedom and yielding seemed opposite forces. Thought about it--and being able to yield from "constant battle' would offer a respite of some freedom. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Interesting choice of 6 words with freedom coming as a result of yielding. At first read, freedom and yielding seemed opposite forces. Thought about it--and being able to yield from "constant battle' would offer a respite of some freedom. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from zekeziemann
Like my recent post, I wonder if we are too "pie in the sky"? But we keep praying and listening to the Almighty GOd who protects us.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Like my recent post, I wonder if we are too "pie in the sky"? But we keep praying and listening to the Almighty GOd who protects us.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This posting has nice artwork. It clearly depicts the content of the poem. Well written piece that I enjoyed immensely. Keep up the good work as I look for more from your name.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This posting has nice artwork. It clearly depicts the content of the poem. Well written piece that I enjoyed immensely. Keep up the good work as I look for more from your name.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
True. I like this six word poem as it shows the tension between "yielding" and "battle" and it works both on a world level and on a personal level where one can give grace and yield instead of battling.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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True. I like this six word poem as it shows the tension between "yielding" and "battle" and it works both on a world level and on a personal level where one can give grace and yield instead of battling.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A sad but true commentary. This s excellent. A profound statement in six words. I believe you will do well in the contest. It's the best I've read so far. Good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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A sad but true commentary. This s excellent. A profound statement in six words. I believe you will do well in the contest. It's the best I've read so far. Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much*kahpot
