We would Follow
If Government could show us29 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello KAHPOT: Learning to ride a bike without the assistance of, "TRAINING WHEELS,"
can result in a, "FEW," tumbles: causing knee and elbow scratches and scrapes. It can also result in pain in the, "HUMPED," part of our backs. Perhaps they should show us how to ride by letting us "SEE," them pedal their certification, while proclaiming. "This is how we do it."
And making certain that we understand what their training is all about before they give us a
push-off, let go of the bike, and go. "Careful. Watch out for that..." CRASH!... "Tree." If you ever need any, "Band-Aids, KAHPOT, you're welcome to some of mine. I've got plenty. And trust me. They've got me using them. OW! Great work with your art, KAHPOT. I like it. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Hello KAHPOT: Learning to ride a bike without the assistance of, "TRAINING WHEELS,"
can result in a, "FEW," tumbles: causing knee and elbow scratches and scrapes. It can also result in pain in the, "HUMPED," part of our backs. Perhaps they should show us how to ride by letting us "SEE," them pedal their certification, while proclaiming. "This is how we do it."
And making certain that we understand what their training is all about before they give us a
push-off, let go of the bike, and go. "Careful. Watch out for that..." CRASH!... "Tree." If you ever need any, "Band-Aids, KAHPOT, you're welcome to some of mine. I've got plenty. And trust me. They've got me using them. OW! Great work with your art, KAHPOT. I like it. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you rhonnie69, what a very indepth review, I like it very much, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from BeasPeas
The government is a self-aggrandizing, self-serving entity that will take all it can and pretend to give back. No politician should be allowed to serve more than two terms and then have to go back to civilian life. Then we would be getting somewhere. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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The government is a self-aggrandizing, self-serving entity that will take all it can and pretend to give back. No politician should be allowed to serve more than two terms and then have to go back to civilian life. Then we would be getting somewhere. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good entry kahpot for a short poem contest even if I could pedal a bike I would not desire to peddle Pedal)
their certifications of what they don't even know what they are trying to petal
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Good entry kahpot for a short poem contest even if I could pedal a bike I would not desire to peddle Pedal)
their certifications of what they don't even know what they are trying to petal
Gert
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and did I get peddle wrong, many thanks****kahpot
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You are welcome kahpot
Gert
Comment from lauralumummu
Nice and to the point short poem. Most governments at not doing what we hoped they would. I think this is a picture of one of our politicians, lol.
All the best Laura.
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Nice and to the point short poem. Most governments at not doing what we hoped they would. I think this is a picture of one of our politicians, lol.
All the best Laura.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from zekeziemann
I couldn't agree more. We could start with term limits and eliminate the deadwood and career pols. Well written and intriguing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I couldn't agree more. We could start with term limits and eliminate the deadwood and career pols. Well written and intriguing.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you and yes exactly****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, though succinct in presentation, the words express the sentiments of many, making the submission large and grand - clear, relevant and timely in its allegorical voice - in compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, though succinct in presentation, the words express the sentiments of many, making the submission large and grand - clear, relevant and timely in its allegorical voice - in compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are very welcome indeed...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write here and play on words with sentiments of honesty that is lacking in modern politics, governments are lost in the complex world of power and popularity and leaving countries to govern themselves, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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A clever write here and play on words with sentiments of honesty that is lacking in modern politics, governments are lost in the complex world of power and popularity and leaving countries to govern themselves, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This short poem has a wonderful analogy, my friend, I love it. Nicely done, very cool picture. Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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This short poem has a wonderful analogy, my friend, I love it. Nicely done, very cool picture. Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Your welcome:)
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine social commentary and nice philosophical sentiment dear kahpot! How to change the course of mankind..
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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This is a fine social commentary and nice philosophical sentiment dear kahpot! How to change the course of mankind..
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from robina1978
Great artwork that complements your short poem perfectly. I had to smile when I read it. Can relate completely to the contents. Excellent entry for this contest. I think you kept to the requirements of the contest. Best wishes for it.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Great artwork that complements your short poem perfectly. I had to smile when I read it. Can relate completely to the contents. Excellent entry for this contest. I think you kept to the requirements of the contest. Best wishes for it.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
