Lipstick Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Possible Suspect"Being wronged by her husband, Anna seeks revenge.
4 total reviews
Comment from Natali Holden
I don't think I got a message for this post. Thanks for telling me you got it posted. Anyways, it's awesome! You're getting better and better with scripts. Just one mistake:
"JEFF
It's a tox report. Mary didn't find anything unusual in their systems. She said she's going to run an extensive screen, see if she can find something that (away.)" should just be way.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I don't think I got a message for this post. Thanks for telling me you got it posted. Anyways, it's awesome! You're getting better and better with scripts. Just one mistake:
"JEFF
It's a tox report. Mary didn't find anything unusual in their systems. She said she's going to run an extensive screen, see if she can find something that (away.)" should just be way.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your nice review, I'm so glad you like it, just sorry you had to wait so long. None of my normal reviews reviewed it either I though well guess they don't like my scripts, now I'm wondering if they knew it was posted.
Thanks again for your review and continuous support it means a lot to me.
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I had no idea it was posted, so that could've happened with them too, because (in my opinion at least) your scripts are awesome! I was wondering why there were only 3 reviews. That's probably why.
Comment from Paul Bownas
I am not surer quite what set Anna off, but your story certainly got to me, particularly with no obvious evidence to indicate cause of death. I think this script is very well written, and am now dying to find out the way it ended.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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I am not surer quite what set Anna off, but your story certainly got to me, particularly with no obvious evidence to indicate cause of death. I think this script is very well written, and am now dying to find out the way it ended.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for such a nice review. I am so glad you like it.
Let me give you a quick review. She caught her husband cheating on her with her supposed best friend. When she said she's leaving he knocked her out, tied her up in the basement. When she friend table. Anna knocked both of them out, killed Brad then framed his mistress for murder. She then decided to kill all the town whores so they won't hurt anyone ever again.
Now your up to speed. Thank you again for your wonderful review and encouraging words, they mean a lot to me, take care.
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You are more than welcome Misty.
Comment from Kaye Ouston
Hell hath no fury...I really enjoyed reading this. I could see all the action play out in my mind's eye. Well constructed and easy to follow. Just checking, do you mean long metal tables or long medal tables as you have written in "there are long medal tables along the outer border" I liked the character interplay and the scene sequence was delivered very well so as not to get the reader/viewer confused. Thank you for a wonderful story
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Hell hath no fury...I really enjoyed reading this. I could see all the action play out in my mind's eye. Well constructed and easy to follow. Just checking, do you mean long metal tables or long medal tables as you have written in "there are long medal tables along the outer border" I liked the character interplay and the scene sequence was delivered very well so as not to get the reader/viewer confused. Thank you for a wonderful story
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for such a nice review, and your encouraging words that it makes sense, easy to follow. Thank you for catching my mistake. I'll fix that right now.
Thank you for your kind review, take care.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I found this story extremely interesting and I don't care much for detective stories. It is most well-written and action-packed. A thrilling read.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Excellent. I found this story extremely interesting and I don't care much for detective stories. It is most well-written and action-packed. A thrilling read.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your great review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Script writing is very new to me so I've very nervous until I get my first review. Now I know you like it I can breathe a little easier, take care.
