The Truest Words He Ever Spoke
The President's vow to his only love2 total reviews
Comment from Mimi Linny
Capturing one's love in such a limited number of words seemed like it might be a hard thing to do; however, in this case, I think you've met the challenge and nailed it! Very cute and funny piece about the Prez's favorite love! Great job! LOL - still chuckling!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Capturing one's love in such a limited number of words seemed like it might be a hard thing to do; however, in this case, I think you've met the challenge and nailed it! Very cute and funny piece about the Prez's favorite love! Great job! LOL - still chuckling!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Yes, the man is a bottomless source of material for ridicule. Thank you for your encouraging comments, Mimi!
Comment from Yellie
Pretty quote, but fairly boring.
The editing is crass- I feel I need not point out why.
Poor choice for a quote- especially if you're going to be so tongue-in-cheek about it; this is a love poem, not a joke, dammit!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Pretty quote, but fairly boring.
The editing is crass- I feel I need not point out why.
Poor choice for a quote- especially if you're going to be so tongue-in-cheek about it; this is a love poem, not a joke, dammit!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Yellie, you have much to learn about writing FanStory reviews. Who are you to decide that a love poem should not be a joke?
The man quite obviously is in love with himself. Of course you won't comment on what you call "Crass editing." It has no meaning.
First, learn to write, before having the temerity to pass judgement on others.
I avoid muting other writers, but your case is an exception.
