Please Remember Me
I dedicate this to my wife for our 50th anniversary...33 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on winning the "Thank You" Contest. We have some catching up to do, since we've only been married forty-six years! I admired your rhymed quatrains and use of "soulmate". Here's to many more years of blessings- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Congratulations on winning the "Thank You" Contest. We have some catching up to do, since we've only been married forty-six years! I admired your rhymed quatrains and use of "soulmate". Here's to many more years of blessings- Joan
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Joan, for your wonderful review, I appreciate it. Forty-six years together is truly a blessing Joan. I heard on the National News that 50% of the marriages in America today end in divorce within the first five years, isn't that awful?
Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
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Awful, but not surprising--another reason to be glad we are not average! Smiles- Joan
Comment from rjuselius
This is a well deserved win dear cedar! Your words are so sincere and filled with adoration. I wish my fiance will think of me like that when we're old.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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This is a well deserved win dear cedar! Your words are so sincere and filled with adoration. I wish my fiance will think of me like that when we're old.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Rebekka, for your excellent review. I wish you and your fiance many, many happy years of marriage. I'm sure he will cherish you in his heart for all eternity. Thanks again. Bill
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, congratulations regarding your contest win and recognition for this lovely poem in tribute to your life partner - beautiful in construction and fluid movement...
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, congratulations regarding your contest win and recognition for this lovely poem in tribute to your life partner - beautiful in construction and fluid movement...
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...Bill
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You are very welcome, Bill, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from writerjen
Nicely written poem. Great descriptive language, sweet images throughout the poem. Congratulations on the winning of the Thank You poem contest. You've written a lovely poem to your wife. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Nicely written poem. Great descriptive language, sweet images throughout the poem. Congratulations on the winning of the Thank You poem contest. You've written a lovely poem to your wife. Keep writing!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I'm also glad that you enjoyed it. Have a great day my friend...Bill
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
This is such a lovely poem. Certainly deserving of the win. It really touches the heart. The rhyme and flow were perfect. I don't have a favorite line, because I enjoyed the whole piece. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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This is such a lovely poem. Certainly deserving of the win. It really touches the heart. The rhyme and flow were perfect. I don't have a favorite line, because I enjoyed the whole piece. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Susan, for your wonderful review and rating, I really do appreciate it. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
Have a great day my friend...Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Beautifully said, Bill.
The rhyming is impeccably well composed and this poetic proclamation portraying purest passion, love, and long-term devotion is truly touching.
Bravo, sir...
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Beautifully said, Bill.
The rhyming is impeccably well composed and this poetic proclamation portraying purest passion, love, and long-term devotion is truly touching.
Bravo, sir...
Comment Written 15-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Deano, for your excellent review, I appreciate it.
I haven't been on Fanstory much lately, so how have you been feeling these days? Take care...Bill
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Okay.
I was in the hospital for pneumonia for a couple of weeks, and my congestive heart failure was giving my liver fits for awhile.
Other than that, I'm doing fine.
Thanks for asking.
~Dean
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Cedar,
Lovely piece of Romance Poetry depicting true feelings in enchanting style!
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Contest Winner - deserves to be declared so from every angle!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Hello Cedar,
Lovely piece of Romance Poetry depicting true feelings in enchanting style!
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Contest Winner - deserves to be declared so from every angle!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you, RP, for your wonderful review and rating, I really appreciate your kind words. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Have a great day my friend...Bill
Comment from robina1978
An excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. An utmost original way to that somebody, in this case your wife. It rhymes all the way. Best wishes for the contest. I see you already won it, congratulations, well done.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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An excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. An utmost original way to that somebody, in this case your wife. It rhymes all the way. Best wishes for the contest. I see you already won it, congratulations, well done.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Robina, for your excellent review, I really appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from LIJ Red
Contest winner. Seems logical enough, considering the rhymes and message and prompt. Enjoy those golden years. They are not given to everyone.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Contest winner. Seems logical enough, considering the rhymes and message and prompt. Enjoy those golden years. They are not given to everyone.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. You're exactly right, the golden years are not given to everyone. We are both very thankful for each and every day that we are given. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from sfharper
This thank you poem seems very heartfelt and also shares the worry those that love experience, that one may die before one's spouse. It reads simply, the rhymes are good and is very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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This thank you poem seems very heartfelt and also shares the worry those that love experience, that one may die before one's spouse. It reads simply, the rhymes are good and is very enjoyable.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I'm also thankful that you enjoyed it. Have a great day. Bill
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you're welcome Bill
