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Millenial mystique

Humorous 50 word story

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Comment from teols2016
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Very amusing. Tell the kid to go to a doctor's office and check out the waiting room. Well done and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the fifty-word humor contest. Yes, those poor millennials do not have a clue what a newspaper is or what it can be used for.

Good lick in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading and interesting comments !zanya
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent story for the humorous fifty word contest
There are many things that are now obsolete in the new tech world.
Newspaper will be gone when the last of the "older set" is gone.
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading and critique zanyz