Enter The Pearly Gates
Spiritual poem (Free Verse)17 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem of gratitude with us. I enjoyed your illustration, title and free verse. I am pleased you were receptive to being saved. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem of gratitude with us. I enjoyed your illustration, title and free verse. I am pleased you were receptive to being saved. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the review, Joan. It was a hard thing for me to accept the Lord, since I was abused by my father, I likened God the Father to my own father and was not sure i could trust Him.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Your beautiful message reminds us all that we need to be grateful for all our blessings. The only way this one could be improved would be if you'd found a picture of the pearly gates. I liked this one!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Your beautiful message reminds us all that we need to be grateful for all our blessings. The only way this one could be improved would be if you'd found a picture of the pearly gates. I liked this one!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Brenda.
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You're welcome, my friend.
Comment from MelB
A well written poem about the pearly gates. I find each day that I'm more ready to go than the last. I long to see my mom again.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
A well written poem about the pearly gates. I find each day that I'm more ready to go than the last. I long to see my mom again.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Melissa.
Comment from sandy montgomery
God is good. This is beautiful Patricia and I love the presentatio. Your authors notes were wonderful as well. Thank you again for sharing your faith with such openness. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
God is good. This is beautiful Patricia and I love the presentatio. Your authors notes were wonderful as well. Thank you again for sharing your faith with such openness. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Sandy.
Comment from GracieAnn
Pat,
This poem simply but powerfully gives the reader spiritual insight that is very important. On the last line, I would think that if we are in Heaven, there will be no question that we are grateful. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Pat,
This poem simply but powerfully gives the reader spiritual insight that is very important. On the last line, I would think that if we are in Heaven, there will be no question that we are grateful. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Gracie Ann.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your testimony with us. I imagine that the love of Jesus was a light in your life at that time. He can heal any hurt,
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your testimony with us. I imagine that the love of Jesus was a light in your life at that time. He can heal any hurt,
~patty~
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Patty.
Comment from Mistydawn
You painted such a beautiful picture with your words, so warm peaceful. I pleasant reminder of the promise God gave us so long ago. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
You painted such a beautiful picture with your words, so warm peaceful. I pleasant reminder of the promise God gave us so long ago. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Misty.
Comment from jaded831
Excellent poem on faith, I especially enjoyed reading your author's notes. I have been very depressed lately, because there have been lots of changes, and it stresses me out. Reading your poetry helps me to gain perspective.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Excellent poem on faith, I especially enjoyed reading your author's notes. I have been very depressed lately, because there have been lots of changes, and it stresses me out. Reading your poetry helps me to gain perspective.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Jaded.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written poem full of the truth. We will never be good enough on our own merits. We have trust the Lord to do a good work in us and keep on doing His will each day. Very good job my friend! love, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
Patricia, This is a very well written poem full of the truth. We will never be good enough on our own merits. We have trust the Lord to do a good work in us and keep on doing His will each day. Very good job my friend! love, Teri
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Teri.
Comment from DR DIP
Pat can I ask you something? When you finally enter those pearly gates, what do you feel you shall find. Will it be a life of everlasting bliss with beautiful flowers and waterfalls, sweetly flowing rivers. Will our souls be there in human form
Will heaven look just like Earth? Will there be pace for every christian or believer in God? I respect everyones faith in God but I just have a few questions.
lovely write as always
dip
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
Pat can I ask you something? When you finally enter those pearly gates, what do you feel you shall find. Will it be a life of everlasting bliss with beautiful flowers and waterfalls, sweetly flowing rivers. Will our souls be there in human form
Will heaven look just like Earth? Will there be pace for every christian or believer in God? I respect everyones faith in God but I just have a few questions.
lovely write as always
dip
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks Dip, for your review. I am not really sure what to expect when I enter Heaven, but I believe there will be trees and plants of all kinds. There will be beautiful walls made with colorful gemstones. In the last book of the Bible in the 20th chapter it describes those walls and the stones that make up the walls. It says that the streets will be pure gold, that is so pure it looks like glass. It also says that each gate will be made from a single pearl. I believe the colors will be stunningly beautiful. I believe it will be so fantastic the we will never get tired of the beauty. I can hardly wait, but wait I must until God is ready for me to arrive and He has made sure I have accomplished all that He has assigned for me to do, part of which is writing spiritual poetry.
We will have an immortal body, and we will look much like we did here on earth, as scripture tells me we will be known as we were known. So we will recognize our loved ones and our friends. Patricia
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Dip, I ow you a correction, the chapter in the book of Revelation should have been chapter 21. It is in this chapter that there a about what we will see in Heaven. lot of details