Shoe Shopping Blues
What happens when one does not accept the truth4 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is an awesome Tyburn, my friend. Congratulations on the first place win. It all went together well. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
This is an awesome Tyburn, my friend. Congratulations on the first place win. It all went together well. ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comment.
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Your welcome:)
Comment from persevere
An excellent tyburn poem! You have met all the requirements and description of this scene is vividly descriptive. All the best for success in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
An excellent tyburn poem! You have met all the requirements and description of this scene is vividly descriptive. All the best for success in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thank you kindly for the read and the review.
Comment from RodG
This is a very good tyburn because of the topic chosen and the vivid description of a young child's tantrum during dinner. Excellent selection of verbals. The picture is perfect, too.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
This is a very good tyburn because of the topic chosen and the vivid description of a young child's tantrum during dinner. Excellent selection of verbals. The picture is perfect, too.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments. We are glad these days are long gone.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh I have been there with my of kids and my grand kids, tantrums! But it all passes and peace resumes with a few calm words, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
Oh I have been there with my of kids and my grand kids, tantrums! But it all passes and peace resumes with a few calm words, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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You must have the magic words. We are even past this with our grandchildren. Can't say I miss the moments. Thanks for the read.