A Love That Can Never Be
Unrequited Love9 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh my...this is just TOO pretty!! Congratulations on first place!! I'm so glad you won, and I certainly see why you did!! Just lovely!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Oh my...this is just TOO pretty!! Congratulations on first place!! I'm so glad you won, and I certainly see why you did!! Just lovely!! Blessings...
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
An excellent romance poem. Well written, good rhyming.
And the picture fits perfectly.
Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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An excellent romance poem. Well written, good rhyming.
And the picture fits perfectly.
Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
Comment from RGstar
Lovely. Unrequited love, or the same for a number of reasons, and these hurt.
A lovely presentation, though it is of sadness. This would have fitted into a love poem competition also.
Nicely done.
My best wishes. Good luck in the competition.
RGstar
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Lovely. Unrequited love, or the same for a number of reasons, and these hurt.
A lovely presentation, though it is of sadness. This would have fitted into a love poem competition also.
Nicely done.
My best wishes. Good luck in the competition.
RGstar
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem I really appreciate it.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem I really appreciate it.
Comment from GracieAnn
This Sad Poem submission depicts a universal unrequited love interest that seems to consume the one not loved. Solid aa bb cc bb aa rhyming scheme with emotive word choice. All the best in the contest, :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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This Sad Poem submission depicts a universal unrequited love interest that seems to consume the one not loved. Solid aa bb cc bb aa rhyming scheme with emotive word choice. All the best in the contest, :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review, it's always great to hear from fellow writers.
Comment from teols2016
This is definetly a sad poem. One of the hardest things is letting go of a love that can never be matched by the object of one's desires. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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This is definetly a sad poem. One of the hardest things is letting go of a love that can never be matched by the object of one's desires. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thank you for such a great review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Beautiful! My thoughts are with him always as long as I live,
my body and soul to him I would give.
Still the one that I love will never love me,
and I mourn for a love that can never be.' I know what this feels like, one of the truest forms of pain, never knowing what might have been but always they remain in your heart and dreams. Wonderful poem very impressive simple but incredibly poignant. Kindest regards and good luck Meia xx
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Beautiful! My thoughts are with him always as long as I live,
my body and soul to him I would give.
Still the one that I love will never love me,
and I mourn for a love that can never be.' I know what this feels like, one of the truest forms of pain, never knowing what might have been but always they remain in your heart and dreams. Wonderful poem very impressive simple but incredibly poignant. Kindest regards and good luck Meia xx
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for the nice review. I admire your work, so its a great compliment coming from you.
Comment from fluffnstuff
hi...i think this is a beautiful poem that many people would be able to relate to at one time or another. and the picture you chose is perfect with it. nice write fluff
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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hi...i think this is a beautiful poem that many people would be able to relate to at one time or another. and the picture you chose is perfect with it. nice write fluff
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and for the six stars. I really appreciate it.
Comment from RodG
There is nothing sadder than unrequited love. The Speaker here pours out her heart. I am not a fan of AABB rhyming, but I thought you used the refrain "I mourn for a love that can never be" very well throughout the poem.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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There is nothing sadder than unrequited love. The Speaker here pours out her heart. I am not a fan of AABB rhyming, but I thought you used the refrain "I mourn for a love that can never be" very well throughout the poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. I really appreciate hearing from fellow writers.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about unrequited love, now state of love goes like love's labour lost, there is no chance of revival, love will never love again, sadness begins, lamentation reigns; I liked.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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This speaks about unrequited love, now state of love goes like love's labour lost, there is no chance of revival, love will never love again, sadness begins, lamentation reigns; I liked.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem. It's very much appreciated.
