If Only
A Minute Poem5 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
You want to be a bear, right? Personally, I don't mind the snow. I'm pretty excited about the snow. I'm not excited about the twenty below zero that will be here before we know it though. That I will hibernate with you through.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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You want to be a bear, right? Personally, I don't mind the snow. I'm pretty excited about the snow. I'm not excited about the twenty below zero that will be here before we know it though. That I will hibernate with you through.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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No, not a bear. A tulip maybe...thanks for the positive feedback!
Comment from Liberty Justice
Congrats! Wow! I just viewed competition, and you have my thumbs up. Your poem is so free and joyful, filled with winter hibernation and vivid descriptions of poet's longing. I feel your desire to be tucked away like the flowers. lol liberty justice Complicated rhyme scheme.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Congrats! Wow! I just viewed competition, and you have my thumbs up. Your poem is so free and joyful, filled with winter hibernation and vivid descriptions of poet's longing. I feel your desire to be tucked away like the flowers. lol liberty justice Complicated rhyme scheme.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Yup, just tuck me away and wake me up in April with the tulips! Thanks for the positive feedback.
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Tell me who you are after contest. lol liberty justice
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your nature poem. I found it to be most interesting. I love your artwork choice and you followed the syllable count. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your nature poem. I found it to be most interesting. I love your artwork choice and you followed the syllable count. Best wishes!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments!
Comment from Ellie707
This is a good poem as it makes me see it in real time. I like the inference of the person wanting to escape during winter - or perhaps bad times - and rest and then just magically appear in spring - rejuvenated.
The picture is perfect for this poem along with the title.
Fantastic job!
Ellie
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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This is a good poem as it makes me see it in real time. I like the inference of the person wanting to escape during winter - or perhaps bad times - and rest and then just magically appear in spring - rejuvenated.
The picture is perfect for this poem along with the title.
Fantastic job!
Ellie
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your insights and positive thoughts.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Now I really liked this piece. So often these are flippant or don't really say anything of note. Great imagery in this one and you names the structure.
very nice.
GMG
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Hi there,
Now I really liked this piece. So often these are flippant or don't really say anything of note. Great imagery in this one and you names the structure.
very nice.
GMG
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comments. I personally don't like poetry that makes no sense.
