Cafe in Evening
an experience in fine dining3 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Very nice use of the 1-6-1 poetry. I can't think of a nicer way to dine. I thought the use of dine, devine and fine was perfect and made me want to join you for the evening. :) I also enjoyed the graphic.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Very nice use of the 1-6-1 poetry. I can't think of a nicer way to dine. I thought the use of dine, devine and fine was perfect and made me want to join you for the evening. :) I also enjoyed the graphic.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I do appreciate your response--and I loved the 6 stars!!!!! elaine
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you are welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the decorum of the cafe; gorgeous and stylish dress it is always a fun and enjoyment; divine feeling is more than enough; it is fine to dine in such a state; I liked.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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This speaks about the decorum of the cafe; gorgeous and stylish dress it is always a fun and enjoyment; divine feeling is more than enough; it is fine to dine in such a state; I liked.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the response. I appreciate your thoughts. elaine
Comment from MissMerri
I consider these ultra-short poems among the most difficult to write, but I think you've met the challenge very well with this little one. All the lines rhyme and the syllable count is as it should be. The illustration is great and adds to the words. I wish you much luck in this contest. Good job of saying a lot with only six words. I can't do it!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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I consider these ultra-short poems among the most difficult to write, but I think you've met the challenge very well with this little one. All the lines rhyme and the syllable count is as it should be. The illustration is great and adds to the words. I wish you much luck in this contest. Good job of saying a lot with only six words. I can't do it!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and responding to my few words!! elaine
