Carnage
Too much carnage every day5 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good six word poem.
You've told your story perfectly in only six words.
Well done.
Good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
A good six word poem.
You've told your story perfectly in only six words.
Well done.
Good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from DonandVicki
I hate to think it, but i'm not sure that it will ever end. As long as there are hate and public media wanting to get good ratings. I'm sure we will see more ugliness.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
I hate to think it, but i'm not sure that it will ever end. As long as there are hate and public media wanting to get good ratings. I'm sure we will see more ugliness.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your comments. I'm afraid to think you might be correct
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Comment from zanya
Yes our world seems to be caught up in a permanent cycle of tragedy -local - international - and the Web brings it all right into our homes -no escape - well portrayed here
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
Yes our world seems to be caught up in a permanent cycle of tragedy -local - international - and the Web brings it all right into our homes -no escape - well portrayed here
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments. Gramlot8
Comment from robina1978
This is a great entry for this contest with six words. You said a lot about these up-to-date things that are happening just now. It is also very original. I love it. Bets wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
This is a great entry for this contest with six words. You said a lot about these up-to-date things that are happening just now. It is also very original. I love it. Bets wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for the review and especially the 6 stars!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I somehow get the feeling that if weapons weren't readily available, there'd be less of these - call me crazy but that's how I see it...
A fine piece saying a lot in with little.
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
Hi there,
I somehow get the feeling that if weapons weren't readily available, there'd be less of these - call me crazy but that's how I see it...
A fine piece saying a lot in with little.
GMG
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.