Spring Garden
A thought of Spring53 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
What a lovely description of a spring garden! The wonders of nature are delightful. Your poem is well written and rhymes well. Your author notes are helpful in regard to the poetic form you have employed. Evi
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What a lovely description of a spring garden! The wonders of nature are delightful. Your poem is well written and rhymes well. Your author notes are helpful in regard to the poetic form you have employed. Evi
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
Comment from Faith Williams
Your poem is a walk through the olfactory sense-scent, aromas, fragrance, breathing deep, but I love the phrase 'palette of perfumes'. I can imagine myself on a stroll through the spring garden. A lovely image.
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Your poem is a walk through the olfactory sense-scent, aromas, fragrance, breathing deep, but I love the phrase 'palette of perfumes'. I can imagine myself on a stroll through the spring garden. A lovely image.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent ballad with nice iambic tetrameter and trimester.
Beautiful nature's imagery and senses feast. Nice and simple presentation
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent ballad with nice iambic tetrameter and trimester.
Beautiful nature's imagery and senses feast. Nice and simple presentation
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tom,
This is a wonderful traditional poem with marvelous rhymes and meter,
but it is the imagery that sets it apart. Spring is certainly the fragrant season.
You also have a nice touch of alliteration throughout the stanzas.
Out of sixes, but well deserving of the extra star.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Tom,
This is a wonderful traditional poem with marvelous rhymes and meter,
but it is the imagery that sets it apart. Spring is certainly the fragrant season.
You also have a nice touch of alliteration throughout the stanzas.
Out of sixes, but well deserving of the extra star.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from Ben Colder
I raise roses and find their beauty beyond words to describe. Sometimes I think they hear me when I brag of how beautiful they are. You did well with poem. Thanks for sharing.
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I raise roses and find their beauty beyond words to describe. Sometimes I think they hear me when I brag of how beautiful they are. You did well with poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from Heather Bagley
Very sweet poem! It invokes a strong image of some noble, court lady, or princess strolling through the well-groomed palace gardens. Lovely flowing poem! ~Heather
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Very sweet poem! It invokes a strong image of some noble, court lady, or princess strolling through the well-groomed palace gardens. Lovely flowing poem! ~Heather
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
The garden sounds like it's very beautiful. I can picture the colours and imagine the scents of the individual flowers blending into a delightful aroma. Another wonderful poem. You are certainly a talented soul.
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The garden sounds like it's very beautiful. I can picture the colours and imagine the scents of the individual flowers blending into a delightful aroma. Another wonderful poem. You are certainly a talented soul.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
Comment from CD Richards
Nothing much to say except it's a delight to read. The ballad style is probably my favourite; it gives a lovely musical quality to the words. The seduction theme is so well done, and the language choices are excellent. Great job.
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Nothing much to say except it's a delight to read. The ballad style is probably my favourite; it gives a lovely musical quality to the words. The seduction theme is so well done, and the language choices are excellent. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
Comment from Aussie
Speaking of the garden. You described life and love amongst the blooms and bees as they meet and make more love than a man could ever experience. I loved your poem about nature's glory. K xx
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Speaking of the garden. You described life and love amongst the blooms and bees as they meet and make more love than a man could ever experience. I loved your poem about nature's glory. K xx
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
Comment from royowen
Nature is not a random, it's fashioned by that perfect hand, each individual environment is testimony to a design that fits perfectly with itself, so much so that introduced species become the enemy of its harmony, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Nature is not a random, it's fashioned by that perfect hand, each individual environment is testimony to a design that fits perfectly with itself, so much so that introduced species become the enemy of its harmony, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
