Life's Cycle
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Comment from robyn corum
Jaded,
What a cool series of thoughts and images for the seasons. I'm not sure how I missed reviewing this one during the contest. (??).
I hope you did better in the voting than I did!! Ha!!
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Jaded,
What a cool series of thoughts and images for the seasons. I'm not sure how I missed reviewing this one during the contest. (??).
I hope you did better in the voting than I did!! Ha!!
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I got two votes. Thanks for your review.
Comment from zanya
A nice figurative touch here as the poet reflects on the four seasons- in this four seasons poem - and their idiosyncracies - and accompanied by a beautiful pic
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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A nice figurative touch here as the poet reflects on the four seasons- in this four seasons poem - and their idiosyncracies - and accompanied by a beautiful pic
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Four Seasons poem.
Very colorful and descriptive. And a beautiful picture.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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A good Four Seasons poem.
Very colorful and descriptive. And a beautiful picture.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four line poem about the four seasons and a rhyming bonus worked into.your approach. Wr can compare the seasons of nature with the life cycle of the human race.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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A very well-written four line poem about the four seasons and a rhyming bonus worked into.your approach. Wr can compare the seasons of nature with the life cycle of the human race.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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That was my intention, thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from SLee7
That was a wonderful visual aid that made me want to go back and do fall again and gave me a longing heart for winter. I really enjoyed the line "Summer unleashes many sins." Great job!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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That was a wonderful visual aid that made me want to go back and do fall again and gave me a longing heart for winter. I really enjoyed the line "Summer unleashes many sins." Great job!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from rama devi
Good entry for this unique contest. Excellent phonetics, especially the consonance of L & T in the first stanza, the alliteration an consonance of S in the second and third and the alliteration of B between brand and begins with consonance in hibernation. Sounds great read aloud. Fine flow and rhyming.
Good luck
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Good entry for this unique contest. Excellent phonetics, especially the consonance of L & T in the first stanza, the alliteration an consonance of S in the second and third and the alliteration of B between brand and begins with consonance in hibernation. Sounds great read aloud. Fine flow and rhyming.
Good luck
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review.
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:-)))
