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Why I don't write fast

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Comment from teols2016
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. It can be tough to embrace the negative, but when we do, we might learn something new and it all comes out positive. I know I've had that experience many times over since joining this site. Well done and thank you again.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading, teols2016.

    Phillip
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Phillip;
It is hard to come up with a story idea that will be seen as relevant. Everyone has so many different interests, and there are those who refuse to read anything in a certain genre, or containing a warning of some sort.

Sometimes, we just need to write to empty our heads of the words that are milling around,

~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Patty for responding. Relevant is really the wrong word for the title because it has no relations with what I talked about. When I used the word current, I was thinking in terms of having more recent work instead of the old ones setting on my page. Sometimes I don't think about what to write about until it has been written. By the way, I was angry with you because you called me out on a poorly written story. Please, for give me. My patient gets short when I attempt to handle more than I should. I get a little too ambitious and blind when I don't take a minute and relax. I think better when I'm rested. Now, I will re-fan you since I've cleared my conscience.

    Phillip
reply by Mustang Patty on 06-Nov-2017
    you are more than forgiven. We all have those days,
    ~p~
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    I'm a single guy who lives along which means I have to pick myself up whereas couples pick each other up. Our lifestyle, understanding, experiences, education, and etc are different. So, communication is all we have to understand each other. I can't unload my concerns on anyone. I have the responsibility to manage myself. It's not royal life. I hope you understand without me making our friendship more complicated than I'm already made it. I appreciate you being a good lady. Now, I do want your best suggestions whenever you think I need to know something. Feel free, Patty.
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Comment from GracieAnn
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PM,
This is such an encouraging write that instructs the new and old writers on valuable advice as to how to write and also how to listen to productive and constructive criticism. Well done! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Wow. You are blowing my mind. When I started writing, I never predicted a compliment such as this one. Thank a lot, GracieAnn.

    Phillip
Comment from giraffmang
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Advice is great but there will be an awful lot of it and it is sifting through that advice for what works for you that is the key thing. not all advice is helpful or right unfortunately. The best thing is to research for yourself for things.

king he was nacked - naked.

Keep at it, that's the only way.
GMG


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks a lot for that, giraffmang.

    Phillip
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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YOu are wrong, writers that are determined are ones that really care what others write. Some try too hard to make them conform instead of encouraging.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks, some much for that, understanding, Barb. I will remember.

    Phillip

Comment from robyn corum
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Phillip,

*smile* Sounds like there are plenty of other people on this site willing to give you the advice you really don't want. hahaha! (Not just me!!) I really appreciate your great attitude toward writing and toward the learning process. It shows a writer's heart, I believe. Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    You are the best for my growth, Robyn, even though it is slow and more difficult than what was expected.

    Phillip
reply by robyn corum on 04-Nov-2017
    You are way too kind, Phillip!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    No, you are the kind one, Robyn. The opposite of your kindness is why I continue at this purpose. I would hate to be the receiver of your rejection. Seriously.
Comment from Heather Knight
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Well, this post is relevant and thought-provoking. As for reviewers and criticism, volumes could be written.
I think we have to find our own voice. We should listen to what others tell us and accept what makes sense to us. Not just follow opinions blindly.
Thanks for bringing up this interesting topic.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Yes, I believe that is right, Maria. However, I really need to take it slower than I like. Thanks for that wise advice.

    Phillip
Comment from apky
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I personally write stuff I like. Relevance is also relative, Phillip. What I find relevant might not be relevant to other people.

On the subject of readership, as a rule whether I put up my story for two days or four days (the most I've put up my posts for), I have only a few devoted and supportive readers who look at my work and give me reviews. On average I have between 6 to 10 reviews per post, mostly six. But I'm happy with that because I know these are readers who really like my story (not the funny money) and give me valuable feedback.

Thanks for posting these thoughts.

kid who told the king he was necked(naked) while the

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    I add and take away works to read as I struggle to improve. I do this to keep from getting behind on what I attempt to learn. I try organizing my study time this way. It has nothing to do the author's skill because all of them are better and educated writers. Thanks for reading, apky.

    Phillip
reply by apky on 04-Nov-2017
    No reason to beat yourself, Phillip. We're all here to learn and improve, higher education or not. Creativity needs more than just some theory!

    Best,
    Aki
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Beating myself is what I seem to do best, but in time, I will change. Thanks, apky.

    Phillip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Everyone has the right to be heard, none of us are perfect and you'd be surprised how many souls you can reach with your stories. Never give up on what you enjoy doing, if you think a story is worth reading then chances are others will think the same, good luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Dolly. I know I could count on your support even though many times they are filled with errors.

    Phillip
Comment from emptypage
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Hey, you are improving every single day. I used to believe that some of us are born with a good ear for language--some are--and others with a gift for storytelling, but that few could do both. Some writing can be learned. You had the storytelling part, you just needed to bone up on grammar. You are writing soooo much better now. I for one, encourage you to keep it up.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Now, that means a lot to me, coming from you, Marla. In fact, I pick up small things from writers and your work happen to be one of my favorites. Thanks for the rare comment.

    Phillip