Bring Me Home
For All The Lost And Lonely32 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very philosophical and poem has deep meaning, even though short and sweet. Seems writer tells about how person was born into loving wanting hands; but, then, life comes full circle and is put away in lonesome lands. liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Very philosophical and poem has deep meaning, even though short and sweet. Seems writer tells about how person was born into loving wanting hands; but, then, life comes full circle and is put away in lonesome lands. liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thank you, an excellent read and that's where I find myself, Unfortunately****kahpot
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Stay strong survive life!
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Don't let life get you down. Stay strong survive life. You are special and you are loved and you are not alone. Fan story friends are your companions. We are your other family. lol liberty justice
Comment from LIJ Red
Sounds like Kipling or Houseman talking about redcoats, a little bit of England and the thin red line and all that...which is not criticism. Excellent short short poem.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Sounds like Kipling or Houseman talking about redcoats, a little bit of England and the thin red line and all that...which is not criticism. Excellent short short poem.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from DonandVicki
A very sad and engaging poem using so very few words. The artwork complements your work. The setting sun helps to develop the dark feeling. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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A very sad and engaging poem using so very few words. The artwork complements your work. The setting sun helps to develop the dark feeling. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
Yes, peace indeed. Its strange we long for that, even after death in which we know nothing, but the honor and well being connected to the loyalty of whom and where is of the utmost importance in giving death some kind of meaning.
Nicely said for so few words.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Yes, peace indeed. Its strange we long for that, even after death in which we know nothing, but the honor and well being connected to the loyalty of whom and where is of the utmost importance in giving death some kind of meaning.
Nicely said for so few words.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes Death deserves importance when one does for their country****kahpot
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very touching. This very short poem reaches so many levels of emotions and brings to mind so many thoughts it is nearly overwhelming. Extremely well said in so few words. Fantastic job!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Very touching. This very short poem reaches so many levels of emotions and brings to mind so many thoughts it is nearly overwhelming. Extremely well said in so few words. Fantastic job!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Wow Many thanks and Thank you for reading it the way I was thinking****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a fantastic short poem, my friend. I never did see that movie, I will have to watch it, due to your notes, much appreciated. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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This is a fantastic short poem, my friend. I never did see that movie, I will have to watch it, due to your notes, much appreciated. ~Kerry
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and the Movie was very good****kahpot
Comment from Irish Rain
How sadly beautiful. I never saw 'The Water Diviner'...sounds good. But I understand the precept here. My family is scattered, so we are all in lonely lands. Loved this, blessings...
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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How sadly beautiful. I never saw 'The Water Diviner'...sounds good. But I understand the precept here. My family is scattered, so we are all in lonely lands. Loved this, blessings...
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, I really enjoyed the Movie****kahpot
Comment from Possummagic
I enjoyed your poem " Bring me Home" if it were me writing this poem I would make the following changes.
Instead of " Born I was " I woul write " Born was I" similarly
Instead of " Buried I am.." I would have written " Buried am I"
It just seemed to flow better. PM
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed your poem " Bring me Home" if it were me writing this poem I would make the following changes.
Instead of " Born I was " I woul write " Born was I" similarly
Instead of " Buried I am.." I would have written " Buried am I"
It just seemed to flow better. PM
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Wow thank you, had to write your suggestions down and will go and have a look now I like them many thanks****kahpot
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You?re very welcome. It?s entirely up to you and is just a suggestion. PM
Comment from krys123
Many greetings, Kahpot;
-A fifteen syllabic formatted poem of the disparity being born but yet not buried or laid to rest in the same place you lived.
-An adventurous yet a very sad poem that probably many a person's walking this earth can contest to. Especially those of wars, travels and separation from family and friends.
-The pictures very conducive and relative and very supportive to the conceptual theme of your writing.
-Thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Many greetings, Kahpot;
-A fifteen syllabic formatted poem of the disparity being born but yet not buried or laid to rest in the same place you lived.
-An adventurous yet a very sad poem that probably many a person's walking this earth can contest to. Especially those of wars, travels and separation from family and friends.
-The pictures very conducive and relative and very supportive to the conceptual theme of your writing.
-Thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Again thank you, my Friend, very inspirational for me****kahpot
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Oh, you are very welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from johnwilson
This short piece amazed me because you were able to capture the feeling of peace together. The picture complements it perfectly! I wish more people in this country would realize the wonder of generations together!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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This short piece amazed me because you were able to capture the feeling of peace together. The picture complements it perfectly! I wish more people in this country would realize the wonder of generations together!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and wouldn't it be nice if they (we) did****kahpot
