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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good one mike. Loved it either in script form or short story, and Grandma's reaction was priceless. Got her priorities right the old girl LOL
cheers.
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Good one mike. Loved it either in script form or short story, and Grandma's reaction was priceless. Got her priorities right the old girl LOL
cheers.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Halloween poem. There are not many more things that can go wrong for this grandmother. I feel very lucky I am not in her shoes.
Typo
"You're(Your) brother suffered a heart attack and ran over your
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A very well-written Halloween poem. There are not many more things that can go wrong for this grandmother. I feel very lucky I am not in her shoes.
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"You're(Your) brother suffered a heart attack and ran over your
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
Comment from frogbook
Now that was a bad night, I must say! A most original take on the prompt and an interesting entry for this contest with it's specific requirements for who to scare,
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Now that was a bad night, I must say! A most original take on the prompt and an interesting entry for this contest with it's specific requirements for who to scare,
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
Comment from write hand blue
Hi mystery author, and now for something different, and this certainly is.
The picture sets the right frame of mind in the reader. This is not going to be a church picnic. And it isn't.
We read shock after shock; then that all important twist at the end and so well delivered.
A promising entry with good yuck appeal. LOL Good luck...
~Mel~
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Hi mystery author, and now for something different, and this certainly is.
The picture sets the right frame of mind in the reader. This is not going to be a church picnic. And it isn't.
We read shock after shock; then that all important twist at the end and so well delivered.
A promising entry with good yuck appeal. LOL Good luck...
~Mel~
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
Comment from kiwigirl2821
The Matlock demise did it huh? Quite a funny little story for this contest. So far it has been the best of the ones I've read. Good ending punch line. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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The Matlock demise did it huh? Quite a funny little story for this contest. So far it has been the best of the ones I've read. Good ending punch line. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
Comment from emptypage
Well, that was a surprise turn of events in a very short piece. I like short pieces, I like surprises, and I really love Grandmas.
No chills anywhere, except at the mention of the Incredible Bulk. Well done.
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Well, that was a surprise turn of events in a very short piece. I like short pieces, I like surprises, and I really love Grandmas.
No chills anywhere, except at the mention of the Incredible Bulk. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Hehehehehe!
I sure wasn't expecting that ending. Too darn funny. Matlock ain't my thing, but there are other shows that would get that reaction. Not sure I'd be ho hum about a Viagra soaked man though. Smile NG
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Hehehehehe!
I sure wasn't expecting that ending. Too darn funny. Matlock ain't my thing, but there are other shows that would get that reaction. Not sure I'd be ho hum about a Viagra soaked man though. Smile NG
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
Comment from teols2016
Very amusing. That is one bad day. And how dare anyone stop showing reruns of Matlock! Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Very amusing. That is one bad day. And how dare anyone stop showing reruns of Matlock! Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, no old ladies swooning in fright here.
But, I agree, it's a tough chore--scaring old ladies, I mean.
But did you have to pull out the Viagra?
Hitting below the belt, I think.
Are these prompts really fun?
Just asking.
Peace, Lee
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Well, no old ladies swooning in fright here.
But, I agree, it's a tough chore--scaring old ladies, I mean.
But did you have to pull out the Viagra?
Hitting below the belt, I think.
Are these prompts really fun?
Just asking.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL! Yup, you can do an awful lot to a little old lady, but you better not dare mess with her Matlock reruns. A great little script to go with the prompt. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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LOL! Yup, you can do an awful lot to a little old lady, but you better not dare mess with her Matlock reruns. A great little script to go with the prompt. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
