Pawprints
Pet poem 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
They are gorgeous dogs. A nice 5-7-5 expressed well for this cute and "aristocratic" breed of dogs. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
They are gorgeous dogs. A nice 5-7-5 expressed well for this cute and "aristocratic" breed of dogs. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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THANKS FOR READING AND CRITIQUE ZANYA
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about the paw prints the little dogs leave in the heart. You used very good descriptive wording. great notes and great art work. Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about the paw prints the little dogs leave in the heart. You used very good descriptive wording. great notes and great art work. Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
Oh, such cute puppies!! A truly delightful poem, perfectly composed within the specific syllable count, and the use of 'aristocratic' to describe King Charles Cavaliers was truly inspired. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
Oh, such cute puppies!! A truly delightful poem, perfectly composed within the specific syllable count, and the use of 'aristocratic' to describe King Charles Cavaliers was truly inspired. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading &critique zanya