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Comment from Irish Rain
This looks like a great entry for this antonym contest. I find these short forms harder than long forms, you did wonderfully, blessings...
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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This looks like a great entry for this antonym contest. I find these short forms harder than long forms, you did wonderfully, blessings...
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from krys123
Bravo, Kahpot;
-again your special expertise in writing short quips and making them full of conceptual understanding of life is just truly amazing.
-In this particular antonym poem you able to create fix difference between the warm and cold blood of existence still refer to the absence of love and life that makes it even more dismal.
-You captured the essence of life in a way that is in a very morose understanding so very true today.
-Good luck in the contest as this entry to the contest is one that you will catch many a reader's eyes.
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Bravo, Kahpot;
-again your special expertise in writing short quips and making them full of conceptual understanding of life is just truly amazing.
-In this particular antonym poem you able to create fix difference between the warm and cold blood of existence still refer to the absence of love and life that makes it even more dismal.
-You captured the essence of life in a way that is in a very morose understanding so very true today.
-Good luck in the contest as this entry to the contest is one that you will catch many a reader's eyes.
Alex
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Wow thank you very much, what a great understanding review****kahpot
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You are super welcome, Kahpot, and take care and do have a great day.
Alex
Comment from johnwilson
Usually I don't care for pieces with so little words; however, I'm happy that this is an exception. The picture seduced me in, yet those words made me gasp! That's the epitome of war!!!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Usually I don't care for pieces with so little words; however, I'm happy that this is an exception. The picture seduced me in, yet those words made me gasp! That's the epitome of war!!!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and unfortunately yes****kahpot
Comment from GracieAnn
Kahpot,
You have met the requirements of this Antonym Poetry Contest by juxtaposing warm and cold quite convincingly. It is pithy and communicates far more than the words it took to create it. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Kahpot,
You have met the requirements of this Antonym Poetry Contest by juxtaposing warm and cold quite convincingly. It is pithy and communicates far more than the words it took to create it. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Your words capture clearly the opposites here. Excellent use of words that creates a clear picture of warm and cold. In few words, you say much about life. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Your words capture clearly the opposites here. Excellent use of words that creates a clear picture of warm and cold. In few words, you say much about life. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Hitcher
I think you have nailed this form friend, your Antonym is a little beauty. The visuals are powerful stir the emotions... war means death and the spilling of blood! Good luck, I think this one is a contender for sure : )
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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I think you have nailed this form friend, your Antonym is a little beauty. The visuals are powerful stir the emotions... war means death and the spilling of blood! Good luck, I think this one is a contender for sure : )
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing this well formed Antonym poem. I think this should do well in the contest. I didn't even realize it was an antonym thing until I focused on the context. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing this well formed Antonym poem. I think this should do well in the contest. I didn't even realize it was an antonym thing until I focused on the context. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Earthlover
This is very creative and true. I really like the use of oppisite meaning words to really get the message across. Warm and cold are great contrast words.
Wishing you the best in the contest.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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This is very creative and true. I really like the use of oppisite meaning words to really get the message across. Warm and cold are great contrast words.
Wishing you the best in the contest.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, another exceptional philosophical write by this gifted poet, artistically delivered - says so much in so few words - fully and intelligently compliant with the prompt. I wish you best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, another exceptional philosophical write by this gifted poet, artistically delivered - says so much in so few words - fully and intelligently compliant with the prompt. I wish you best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, you write your reviews as well as your poems ( work) wonderfully and very inspirational, if I had a review vote left it would be yours****kahpot
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate the thought so much - you are indeed a gifted gem...Eve
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
WEll you have this one perfectly done using the warm and cold opposite, but better is the meaning that you put to the words taking smoothly from one to the other
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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WEll you have this one perfectly done using the warm and cold opposite, but better is the meaning that you put to the words taking smoothly from one to the other
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, I like this site and of course yourself for the encouragement that you give when people try something new, many, many thanks****kahpot
