Doubtful Projects
Examining whether to continue projects16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred word flash fiction. Employees that come to work while they are I'll are often overlooked for their loyalty. It makes one wonder if it is worth the effort.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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A very well-written hundred word flash fiction. Employees that come to work while they are I'll are often overlooked for their loyalty. It makes one wonder if it is worth the effort.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading, Sandra.
Phillip
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello pbomar1115
Really good made me smile, it sound like the Employee finally found and not worry about finishing his projects plans to get hay fever so his Boss will fire him
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Hello pbomar1115
Really good made me smile, it sound like the Employee finally found and not worry about finishing his projects plans to get hay fever so his Boss will fire him
Gert
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading, Gert.
Phillip
Comment from Ricky1024
This is very well written and worthy of my five stars. Adjective contact Kent met with object of contact in in created great descriptive measures
The Scene, as well as Imagery were appropriuate.
Doctor Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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This is very well written and worthy of my five stars. Adjective contact Kent met with object of contact in in created great descriptive measures
The Scene, as well as Imagery were appropriuate.
Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Ricky1024
Phillip
Comment from robyn corum
hahahahaha!
Oh, come one, Philip. I won't believe that for one minute. That a guy could blame his current daily problems on what the president is doing? Nah. That's just a cop-out. If you need to do it - just get in there and DO IT. *smile* Right?
So, get to work!
(and wipe that nose!) hahaha!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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hahahahaha!
Oh, come one, Philip. I won't believe that for one minute. That a guy could blame his current daily problems on what the president is doing? Nah. That's just a cop-out. If you need to do it - just get in there and DO IT. *smile* Right?
So, get to work!
(and wipe that nose!) hahaha!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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You are absolutely right, Robyn.First, when Patty called me out on this she added that this isn't a Flash Fiction. I knew she was right but the damage was done and I felt like crap. So, I thought to do more work later to this poor attempt at "I don't know what the heck I was thinking.", so I let it stay until I replace it. This was a desperate attempt to increase my Ranking. Besides, I would not blame Trump for my problems. As far as I'm the concern, It doesn't matter who the president is--l"m poor, not a businessman--my problem will remain the same. Everybody has to deal with the people's choice. I'm not crying. I screwed up. I hate this piece, Robyn. You rightly called me out and I appreciate that. hugely. I will put in my effort.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
The mood is evident as is the topic.
But, I don't understand the how that relates to the 'far off center' fact.
Sorry, I'm just not getting it. I might have tried to tie it in a little more, flowing from one subject to the next.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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The mood is evident as is the topic.
But, I don't understand the how that relates to the 'far off center' fact.
Sorry, I'm just not getting it. I might have tried to tie it in a little more, flowing from one subject to the next.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I really think I missed the Flash Fiction's objective; however, I just might still use what's been started at a later time. Thanks for your honest opinion, Sharon.
Phillip
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Phillip,
we all go through this trying times wondering whether or not to keep venturing forth or whether it's time to call it a day, for many different reasons.
The story is a little light here though.
G
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Hi Phillip,
we all go through this trying times wondering whether or not to keep venturing forth or whether it's time to call it a day, for many different reasons.
The story is a little light here though.
G
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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I shouldn't have entered this one. I should have used it another way, but not in the contest. I really don't feel good about this one for any contest, giraffmang. But, I hope the next one is better.
Phillip
Comment from GracieAnn
pbomar1115,
This 100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry has the right amount of words and an unexpected ending with a possible double meaning. Humorous. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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pbomar1115,
This 100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry has the right amount of words and an unexpected ending with a possible double meaning. Humorous. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading, GracieAnn.
Phillip
Comment from apky
Don't mind the CatastroTrump, my friend.
My only prayer (after I gave up praying that
someone there will kick him out of office before
six months are over) is that he doesn't win a second
term in office.
Wishing you well,
Aki
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Don't mind the CatastroTrump, my friend.
My only prayer (after I gave up praying that
someone there will kick him out of office before
six months are over) is that he doesn't win a second
term in office.
Wishing you well,
Aki
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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The best thing about people is they learn to adapt; so who knows? Trump could be re-elected. Although people champion one idea or view, yet do another.
Phillip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes Donald certainly shocked the world with his win and made your hay fever pale into insignificance! The sentence: 'I'm not far off center when I remind you (of) one fact. You missed the word 'of' out of the sentence. A great read, have a great day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Yes Donald certainly shocked the world with his win and made your hay fever pale into insignificance! The sentence: 'I'm not far off center when I remind you (of) one fact. You missed the word 'of' out of the sentence. A great read, have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Dolly, I will take care of the problem.
Phillip
Comment from emptypage
I'm with you, man! I can't get motivated to do much of anything since the yam beat my beloved Hillary. And look what he's done to us. Nazis are marching in the streets, for God's sake!
Good luck getting back to your projects.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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I'm with you, man! I can't get motivated to do much of anything since the yam beat my beloved Hillary. And look what he's done to us. Nazis are marching in the streets, for God's sake!
Good luck getting back to your projects.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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The project is a total lie, all made up. However, I think a plausible story can be created around the insurance issue. I thought you were going to tell me about that "setting" needed to be changed to "sitting." Also, the election tricked everyone. Nobody is truthful about very personal economic concerns. So, its back to the drawing board, emptypage.
Phillip
