There is no U.S.A. in O.N.E.
Born he was but not for us48 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
It's a solid entry into the six word poetry contest Kahpot. You use each word effectively and leave open all options to like or dislike. Nicely penned. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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It's a solid entry into the six word poetry contest Kahpot. You use each word effectively and leave open all options to like or dislike. Nicely penned. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes there have been a few of both ****kahpot
Comment from Delahay
I hope I don't misunderstand your intent. I thought at first that you were saying that Trump stands for us all. I now believe you are saying that he stands for himself. I do think that is true.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I hope I don't misunderstand your intent. I thought at first that you were saying that Trump stands for us all. I now believe you are saying that he stands for himself. I do think that is true.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and you read it right For himself which I think is not good for a World leader****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
I am sorry to have to agree with your characterization. I had hoped the President would grow beyond himself once in office, but each day seems to make that possibility distressingly less likely. Thank you for adding the creative title and the drawing, which leave no doubt about what your words mean. Sighs, but best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I am sorry to have to agree with your characterization. I had hoped the President would grow beyond himself once in office, but each day seems to make that possibility distressingly less likely. Thank you for adding the creative title and the drawing, which leave no doubt about what your words mean. Sighs, but best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you and like all I hope I am very wrong, time will tell****kahpot
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We can only hope... More sighs- Joan
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello kahpot
This is a very good example of free speech, speak as you feel' which you did in six words
Me, I just pray when he was born, he does stand for us
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Hello kahpot
This is a very good example of free speech, speak as you feel' which you did in six words
Me, I just pray when he was born, he does stand for us
Gert
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend****kahpot
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You are welcome kahpot
Gert
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written six word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and the art work speaks for itself. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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This is a very well written six word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and the art work speaks for itself. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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you are so welcome!
Comment from jusylee72
Well that pretty much describes the word selfish in six easy words. Well Done I might add, very truthful and eye opening. Thank you for the candor of your words.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Well that pretty much describes the word selfish in six easy words. Well Done I might add, very truthful and eye opening. Thank you for the candor of your words.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from robyn corum
Kahpot,
OUCH. So...how do you really feel? *smile* Evidently, you are not a fan of the current president?
I, for one (get it?) hope you are incorrect. I'm hoping that there is a lot more going on than we can readily see and that when we look back, perhaps time will show this period as more than just a greedy, self-aggrandizing moment in time. I'm praying, anyway.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Kahpot,
OUCH. So...how do you really feel? *smile* Evidently, you are not a fan of the current president?
I, for one (get it?) hope you are incorrect. I'm hoping that there is a lot more going on than we can readily see and that when we look back, perhaps time will show this period as more than just a greedy, self-aggrandizing moment in time. I'm praying, anyway.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you and I hope I am definitely incorrect many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Kingsrookviii
I wish you well in the contest, although I completely disagree with you. However, I am sure that this will be popular with many on this site and won't subtract any stars just because I disagree with you. But I do strongly disagree with the tone of this and most of the cheap shots so many are taking at President Trump.
He is, after all, the leader of One Nation only; The U.S.A. and he is acting accordingly and not going along with the globalist movement. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I wish you well in the contest, although I completely disagree with you. However, I am sure that this will be popular with many on this site and won't subtract any stars just because I disagree with you. But I do strongly disagree with the tone of this and most of the cheap shots so many are taking at President Trump.
He is, after all, the leader of One Nation only; The U.S.A. and he is acting accordingly and not going along with the globalist movement. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, many comments have come back without explanation I thank you for giving me understanding, and still a five, I have received threes and fours, I hope to learn from all comments this is really appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Oatmeal
KAHPOT,
Short and sweet...just like I like them! Of course the length is what the contest dictates. Your theme is a jerk in my eyes. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. The artwork complements your poem.
It is completely error free.
I can only wish you the best of luck in this contest.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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KAHPOT,
Short and sweet...just like I like them! Of course the length is what the contest dictates. Your theme is a jerk in my eyes. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. The artwork complements your poem.
It is completely error free.
I can only wish you the best of luck in this contest.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, my freind****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, sorry to say, it certainly appears you're right, and it is absolutely tragic in this world of ours today - expressive in its concise and lucid description of an uncertain force, struggling for personal pride, accomplishment, understanding and approval, regardless of cost - complies fully with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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In my opinion, sorry to say, it certainly appears you're right, and it is absolutely tragic in this world of ours today - expressive in its concise and lucid description of an uncertain force, struggling for personal pride, accomplishment, understanding and approval, regardless of cost - complies fully with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and like all, I hope He proves me wrong****kahpot
