Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your love poem with its rhythm and internal plus end rhymes. The picture you selected is charming as well. Here's to savouring love! Smiles and happy Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017

Thankyou so much Joan really appreciate your review

dip

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi dip. This is a nicely composed romance poem. The use of internal line and end-line rhyme, especially in the first stanza is nice. This one is my favorite, though:
"Gets me through another day
Whenever you're not there
You're all I think of when I'm away
Just want you to be aware"
Love does get us through our days, especially the most difficult ones.
Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thanks so much Marilyn. Your reviews are always positive and mean a lot to me.

dip

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Love once again is the heart of this poem. Peace,love and desire come into play as we all grow into a relationship. Love comes and love goes sometimes until we find ourselves

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thankyou so much Mom much appreciated as always

xxdip

reply by country ranch writer on 22-Oct-2017

Hugs

Comment from Lucian Carter

Excellent

A nice poem to go with a touching picture. The ABAB style works well. You always seem to capture the sweet side of love so well. I aspire to your skill on that front. Good job.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

That is such a compliment Lucian, thankyou.
I an glad you liked it

dip

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Hey, Dip.

Sweet poem. You are--and I've said it before--quite the romantic. I'm not sure who (wife, girl, guy, etc) you love to this degree, but I envy you. Your tender words tell all I need to know.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thankyou so much empty much appreciated

dip

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Hi Mark,
I love the poem and the super cute picture.
The first verse is great, with all those words ending in -iss.
Very nicely written post. And very funny author notes.
Thanks.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thankyou so much Maria at least you like them lol

dip

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Yes, another love poem from the master himself! Love it dear dip! this is just a feel good little poem...of stolen sweet kisses to savor and get through the days! loving that adorable picture too. :-) hugs you

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thanks so much again Susan your reviews always mean a lot to me

dip

Comment from Daniel Silverhawk

Excellent

I love the title to this poem. I wish I would have thought of this.
Saw an error:
That stolen kiss is what I miss
When I'm not next you (to)

It really brings back memories of stolen kisses from me college days. I remember one in particular...
All these years later.
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thanks again Daniel I will fix the error

much appreciated

dip

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Dip, this poem is an okay poem, but it is not really very romantic. Have a wonder filled weekend of joys and blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thanks Pat I appreciate you thoughts and opinion

dip

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I like them Dip! You are so good at writing them. This is a really cute picture and you used really great words also. I enjoyed it very much.
Please check out this one thing:
When I'm not next you
did you meant to say - When I'm not next (to) you

Great job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Yeah I did someone just pointed that out to me I have fixed now thankyou so much Teri

dip