The Depth Of Their Dismay (A Sonnet)
Monorhyme contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from LoannaLois
This is incredible. I have read it now four times. The absolute and convincing flow and speed at which the conclusion is met is true genius.This sonnet is such that you should do more.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This is incredible. I have read it now four times. The absolute and convincing flow and speed at which the conclusion is met is true genius.This sonnet is such that you should do more.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer Loanna. The sonnet is my favorite form to play with. I've written quite a few in my days. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words, L. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Lucian Carter
So let me get this straight. You are writing a letter of complaint and posting it as a poem? Seems like airing dirty laundry to me.
It's not a bad poem. It rhymes. But I'm not a big fan of rants and jabs at the site disguised as contest entries.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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So let me get this straight. You are writing a letter of complaint and posting it as a poem? Seems like airing dirty laundry to me.
It's not a bad poem. It rhymes. But I'm not a big fan of rants and jabs at the site disguised as contest entries.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Yep, it's a contest entry rant. Thanks.
Comment from marybell1
Unfortunately I can only give you six stars -rules I'm afraid. You did follow all the rules and I have to agree with your sentiments. You did a great job so I hope you are not put in the naughty corner. Hope to see you in the voting booth
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Unfortunately I can only give you six stars -rules I'm afraid. You did follow all the rules and I have to agree with your sentiments. You did a great job so I hope you are not put in the naughty corner. Hope to see you in the voting booth
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Wow, thank you, marybell 1. I sure never planned on seeing a big sixer for my little rant, lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, M. You made my night. Thank you again. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Glad I could ease the pain a little.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The rhyme was good. I'm not sure about attacking a group that is doing their job just because you don't agree with a decision. But this flowed well and was easy to read.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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The rhyme was good. I'm not sure about attacking a group that is doing their job just because you don't agree with a decision. But this flowed well and was easy to read.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the review, Michael.
