Baby Mine
Mom and newborn baby5 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
I enjoyed reading your poem about the birth of a child. I think there is no greater experience and you expressed it very well. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
I enjoyed reading your poem about the birth of a child. I think there is no greater experience and you expressed it very well. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks for your great review and comments. Gramalot8
Comment from R56Ma3
So precious and makes me think back to the time when all 3 of my children were babies. Just holding a baby makes me feel warm. Very well done. R56ma3
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
So precious and makes me think back to the time when all 3 of my children were babies. Just holding a baby makes me feel warm. Very well done. R56ma3
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks for your great comments and review. Gramalot8
Comment from nbonner
So sweet, it made me want to cry thinking of when my children were first born and I first saw they're tiny faces. There is nothing like the bond between mother and child. It is one of the strongest bonds that last forever. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
So sweet, it made me want to cry thinking of when my children were first born and I first saw they're tiny faces. There is nothing like the bond between mother and child. It is one of the strongest bonds that last forever. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Wow.... thank you so much for the 6 stars and gracious comments. It's so appreciated. Gramalot8...Jerri
Comment from marybell1
A really beautiful love poem "Baby Mine". You rhymed it well and you chose a beautiful picture. It is easy to write about something so beautiful.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
A really beautiful love poem "Baby Mine". You rhymed it well and you chose a beautiful picture. It is easy to write about something so beautiful.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your comments and review. Gramalot8
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a wonderful poem. I really like you introduced this new baby. My favorite line is the one with rosebud lips. Strong description. But the entire poem screams of "welcome" and "I love you". Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
This is a wonderful poem. I really like you introduced this new baby. My favorite line is the one with rosebud lips. Strong description. But the entire poem screams of "welcome" and "I love you". Great job.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments, Michael. It's greatly appreciated. Gramalot8.... Jerri