Autumn
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Comment from frogbook
'The lock records winter hours,' struck me as a particularly clever line but the whole poem was very well written with great description, though a bit sad to me that winter is near.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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'The lock records winter hours,' struck me as a particularly clever line but the whole poem was very well written with great description, though a bit sad to me that winter is near.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from l.raven
the one thing I love about living in Illinois...is the changing of the seasons...I love your poem...and a stunning picture...very nicely written...love xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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the one thing I love about living in Illinois...is the changing of the seasons...I love your poem...and a stunning picture...very nicely written...love xxoo
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
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your so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Author
How nice your Acrostic Autumn reads
I love your words of where you say (so well)
Underfoot a layer of early frost crackles
Moonlight casts an eerie glow
Nature's cycle of life rotates unerringly
I wish you the best in this contest
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Hello Author
How nice your Acrostic Autumn reads
I love your words of where you say (so well)
Underfoot a layer of early frost crackles
Moonlight casts an eerie glow
Nature's cycle of life rotates unerringly
I wish you the best in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from amada
This is a great Autumn acrostyc poem. You caught very well the many wonders and intricancies of this season. My fave :"Underfoot a layer of early frost crackles." Nice!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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This is a great Autumn acrostyc poem. You caught very well the many wonders and intricancies of this season. My fave :"Underfoot a layer of early frost crackles." Nice!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging critique zanya
Comment from dragonpoet
Well done acrostic description of Autumn. It has strong images and metaphors.
Nice choice of artwork and use of sensed of sight and sound.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Well done acrostic description of Autumn. It has strong images and metaphors.
Nice choice of artwork and use of sensed of sight and sound.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for such an encouraging critique zanya
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Any time, Zanya.
dragonpoet
Comment from Lucian Carter
Nice acrostic. I like that you didn't need to use the word itself within the piece, over even a synonym like fall. The writing is as crisp as fallen leaves and as colorful too. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Nice acrostic. I like that you didn't need to use the word itself within the piece, over even a synonym like fall. The writing is as crisp as fallen leaves and as colorful too. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Great review zanya
