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Never Again!

Baruch Ha Shem

4 total reviews 
Comment from teols2016
Excellent
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What a sad but not untrue story. As the conflict continues, innocent lives are always caught in the middle. Thank you for sharing this. Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

Comment from RoDanni
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a very moving story and perspective. There are many mistakes in the text that probably were caused by copy and pasting--I gave you a six despite them because your story was so good. Please go back and read the entire text of your submission, you will see where big chunks are cut out of your story. I really do love your perspective, thank you for sharing this story.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Thank you very much Roseanne. I did as you suggested and reread the entire story. It's difficult when you have worked for many hours on a story, and something happens that was not a mistake of your making. When such mistakes as text showing up somewhere entirely different. But, it is so reassuring when one gets 6 stars, it reinforces the fact that you do have a good story!
    Thanks again!

    Bar
reply by RoDanni on 20-Oct-2017
    You're welcome--it was too good to let those glitches go unfixed. I look forward to rereading it
Comment from Michael Ludwinder II
Excellent
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This was a creative write. I though in some places you may rely too much on BIG TEXT and BOLD TEXT. Don't know if that is necessary. But that aside this is an interesting read.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2017

Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Excellent
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Powerful piece. You have explained the situation that exists on both sides and can't end because of the deep feelings of revenge for harm done over many decades. Some wars last beyond lifetimes. This is one of them, I fear.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017