From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "The Twists and Turns of Life"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
27 total reviews
Comment from Leftkansas
Twists and turns of life all beyond our control as you very well pointed out. The only thing we can control is our faith in God. With humanity distancing themselves from God, it is refreshing to read about our need of Gratitude to Him. Thank you for helping me in reinforcement of faith and gratitude.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
Twists and turns of life all beyond our control as you very well pointed out. The only thing we can control is our faith in God. With humanity distancing themselves from God, it is refreshing to read about our need of Gratitude to Him. Thank you for helping me in reinforcement of faith and gratitude.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Wow/! Thanks so much for this lovely and generous review! I'm sincerely delighted that you enjoyed my work and also very glad to meet you! Also hoping to see you again and I shall come and visit your works as well. His Grayness: Vance
Comment from Brigitte Elko
I am honored to have the privilege to read this. The insightful vision of life, hope, and gratitude to the MAKER are evident in every line. You are truly and exemplary poet. Words can not praise this enough.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
I am honored to have the privilege to read this. The insightful vision of life, hope, and gratitude to the MAKER are evident in every line. You are truly and exemplary poet. Words can not praise this enough.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Dear Brigitte: I cannot begin to express the joy and gratitude that you have laid upon me with this magnificent review and lovely stars. I have been enjoying your works as well and certainly look forward to sharing more of them with my reflections to you as well. Please stay close! Blessings, love and Hugs! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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My pleasure,sir.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks twists and turns of life, sorrows and happiness, black and white of living, God created; vices foster hate, virtues love; God gifts all we need; I liked.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
This speaks twists and turns of life, sorrows and happiness, black and white of living, God created; vices foster hate, virtues love; God gifts all we need; I liked.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thanks sincerely for your very kind and generous review! Always a joy to hear from you and hope to see you again soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Twists and Turns of Life, has an encouraging message for those who find stumbling blocks popping up. The lines in this poem keep the faith up and remind us we are...
...Within the gardens of GOD...
and being raised and saved
....From the depths of darkness...
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
This poem, The Twists and Turns of Life, has an encouraging message for those who find stumbling blocks popping up. The lines in this poem keep the faith up and remind us we are...
...Within the gardens of GOD...
and being raised and saved
....From the depths of darkness...
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thanks sincerely Bill, for this wonderful review and stars! It is certainly deeply appreciated and as always, very glad to hear from you and looking forward to your next work. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from R56Ma3
Twists and Turns the storms of life in which we go through. It will either make us or brake us, the troubles we endure and with faith in God he will get us through it. Nicely done and God Bless. R56ma3
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
Twists and Turns the storms of life in which we go through. It will either make us or brake us, the troubles we endure and with faith in God he will get us through it. Nicely done and God Bless. R56ma3
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much R56Ma3, for your generous review and lovely stars! Wonderful to hear from you and hope to see you again soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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Your welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This leads the reader down an interesting path.
First the turmoil, it is real.
Then you feel comforted, protected almost.
And then, you realize that you are responsible for your own comfort and protection.
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
This leads the reader down an interesting path.
First the turmoil, it is real.
Then you feel comforted, protected almost.
And then, you realize that you are responsible for your own comfort and protection.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Wow Sharon! First of all...GREAT TO MEET YOU, second, Thanks so much for this lovely review. I shall come around to visit your works and hope to see you again soon. Blessings always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello His GRAYNESS: My beloved brother, I've imagined that if God blesses you to live long enough to get as gray as I...then perhaps you'll turn into a squirrel. When I woke up this morning a few strands of gray remained on my crystal bald. My gray was here so was I. While I was here l viewed the first 7 lines of "The Twists and Turns of Life." Then I opened my Bible to, II CORINTHIANS at the fifth chapter and the seventeenth verse. Considering your poem's message, what you'll find there will interest you. I moved on to the next 4 lines. Once there the "Holy Spirit" pointed out, II TIMOTHY at the first chapter and the seventh verse. Moving right along to the next 7 lines. See: JEREMIAH at the twenty ninth chapter and the eleventh verse. Now. let us view the solution for your next three lines. See" COLOSSIANS at the third chapter at verse 15. Go on to your next 4 lines. See: JAMES
at the first chapter and verse 17. Now. As for your 5 bottom lines see: MATTHEW at the sixth chapter and the thirty-third verse. Let us thank Jesus. With His guidance we've found the solution to the pollution of the "Twist and Turns of Life." I've learned from viewing your poem. Here's hoping that you've learned from writing what I have read. Thank you,
His GRAYNESS.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
Hello His GRAYNESS: My beloved brother, I've imagined that if God blesses you to live long enough to get as gray as I...then perhaps you'll turn into a squirrel. When I woke up this morning a few strands of gray remained on my crystal bald. My gray was here so was I. While I was here l viewed the first 7 lines of "The Twists and Turns of Life." Then I opened my Bible to, II CORINTHIANS at the fifth chapter and the seventeenth verse. Considering your poem's message, what you'll find there will interest you. I moved on to the next 4 lines. Once there the "Holy Spirit" pointed out, II TIMOTHY at the first chapter and the seventh verse. Moving right along to the next 7 lines. See: JEREMIAH at the twenty ninth chapter and the eleventh verse. Now. let us view the solution for your next three lines. See" COLOSSIANS at the third chapter at verse 15. Go on to your next 4 lines. See: JAMES
at the first chapter and verse 17. Now. As for your 5 bottom lines see: MATTHEW at the sixth chapter and the thirty-third verse. Let us thank Jesus. With His guidance we've found the solution to the pollution of the "Twist and Turns of Life." I've learned from viewing your poem. Here's hoping that you've learned from writing what I have read. Thank you,
His GRAYNESS.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Wow! talk about a majestic REVIEW!! I just sat down and found this so I need to say thanks real quick and go get my bible! You have rung all my bells! Thanks so very much and blessings to you always! Vance
Comment from RGstar
Wise words, my friend, and there is a lot of listening to do there, for we seldom listen, and we seldom act before too late.
Faith is something that is dear to those that hold it sacred, and where there is faith, there is goodness, unless corrupted.
Nice messages, Vance.
Have a great day.
RG
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
Wise words, my friend, and there is a lot of listening to do there, for we seldom listen, and we seldom act before too late.
Faith is something that is dear to those that hold it sacred, and where there is faith, there is goodness, unless corrupted.
Nice messages, Vance.
Have a great day.
RG
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks sincerely RG, much appreciated! Vance
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Vance. I enjoyed reading your reflections on life's uncertainties. One constant in our lives is change. Not everything will run smoothly or stay the same. Whatever our purpose here in 3-dimensionality may be, I do believe God has a hand in it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
Hi Vance. I enjoyed reading your reflections on life's uncertainties. One constant in our lives is change. Not everything will run smoothly or stay the same. Whatever our purpose here in 3-dimensionality may be, I do believe God has a hand in it. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Oh, Marilyn, you are indeed wise and I thank you so much for your lovely and generous review, as well as the lovely works you so often grace us with here on Fanstory! Blessings always. Vance
Comment from Oatmeal
HIS GRAYNESS,
Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions.
Telling things very plain and comprehensible. Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
HIS GRAYNESS,
Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions.
Telling things very plain and comprehensible. Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Hi Oatmeal! Great to meet you and thanks so much for the generous and uplifting review! It is sincerely appreciated and I hope to see you again soon. Best wishes! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance