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Smelly Shelly

Life in the mad house

6 total reviews 
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the One-Hundred Word Flash Fiction contest. It seems old Smelly was quite mad. Your story was complete and concise.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thank you Patty.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
    Thank you Patty.
Comment from giraffmang
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hi there,

You did a good job with this 100 word story. These aren't easy to pull off but you managed to get a full story in there.

straightjacket is one word.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thanks. I thought straight jacket was one word but when I checked apparently not.
reply by giraffmang on 12-Oct-2017
    OED, Cambridge, Merriam-Webster all have it listed as a single word. more commonly though is the other spelling of straitjacket.
Comment from DR DIP
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Are the trials and tribulations of a pyromaniac. or was it just a strange fate of coincidences. nice write Jen Was this her way of dealing with confrontation you think

thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    I think pyromaniac probably sums it up. Thanks for reading. Jen
Comment from DonandVicki
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You made your protagonist out to be an angry old woman and gave her every right to be one. I think the artwork complements your short-short story very well. Don

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thanks
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. This is an interesting and entertaining short story. The language is a bit rough but perfectly suitable for the subject of the story. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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wow what an entry to the contest. You are a few words short of being 100 if it has to be 100 spot on, I think you are five shy.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thanks Barb. What would I do without you to check my work, I am so careless. The word count is 98-102 . I had missed some words out but I've corrected it.
    So it should be O.K. now.cheers. Jen