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We lasted thirty nine years together

A Katauta Poem, see foot note.

24 total reviews 
Comment from Dutchie
Exceptional
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Wonderfully written poem Ine. You don't need many words to declare your love to Robert.Everlasting love it is and this word says it all. Wonderful.... Fia

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
    Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week. Thanks once more.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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The wonderful poem compliments the beautiful picture, or the other way around.
Well written Latauta tells a tale with so few words. You don't need punctuation here. It says it all anyways.

Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from teols2016
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Interesting dialect, especially the last line. I'm glad it's worked for you this long and beyond. Thank you for sharing this piece. Great job.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ine.

How are you both coping? Sorry I haven't been around much.

A very well presented contest piece and I wish you the best of luck in it.

These little pieces are waaaaay too hard for me to write but you seem to have got the hang of it. Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. I have not been around much either-won't be for some time, working almost day and night.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job on your poem for the contest. The picture is perfect & your words describe your love well. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from robyn corum
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Ine,

Is that 39 years just married or 39 years married plus dating and all (like allll the time y'all have been together)? This is a precious little poem, sweetie. I think that's such an awesome achievement these days. My hubby and I have been together (married) for 26 years. We dated for 3 before that. But we got together kinda late in life, when we were both around 30. True love is a great blessing, yes?

Anyway, thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week. We have been busy recently with medical issues etc.
Comment from sunnilicious
Exceptional
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Everlasting love... Well thought out and clearly written note to a sweetheart. May your love last an infinity. Nice poem. Good presentation. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week. We have been busy recently with medical issues etc. Thaks for the gorgeous six.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This katauta, Everlasting Love, has the proper set up and reveals one of greatest milestones we can make. Staying married and in love for almost four decades is an immense accomplishment.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week. We have been busy recently with medical issues etc.
Comment from RGstar
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Good luck with this. Points to the heart with longevity and time, for that's all we have, and if solace and harmony can be found, though ups and downs, life has gone a long way towards perfect.
Best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week. We have been busy recently with medical issues etc.
Comment from rheabug
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Good Luck on this contest entry. Very nice presentation with the correct syllable count. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on the 39 years of marriage. HUGS>>>>

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week. We have been busy recently with medical issues etc.