Talk !
Poem /Septolet3 total reviews
Comment from Brigitte Elko
An excellent entry for this contest. It is relevant to these turbulent times and easily understand. The picture, you choose, is an amazing contribution to the poetry. Perfect form and perfect poem. This is a winner! You have my vote.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
An excellent entry for this contest. It is relevant to these turbulent times and easily understand. The picture, you choose, is an amazing contribution to the poetry. Perfect form and perfect poem. This is a winner! You have my vote.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for those encouraging words ! zanya
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You are welcome.
Brigitte
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of symbolism and allusion here! I think that certain Twitter messages are endangering any hope of peace. (the dove of peace in the shadow). I really like the second part but I would change the "cant" to "can't" and the "curbs" to "curb" so that it reads:
Twitter can't
curb diplomacy's
mood music
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
Great use of symbolism and allusion here! I think that certain Twitter messages are endangering any hope of peace. (the dove of peace in the shadow). I really like the second part but I would change the "cant" to "can't" and the "curbs" to "curb" so that it reads:
Twitter can't
curb diplomacy's
mood music
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the call and conveying the message of peace across the world and the diplomatic endeavour to promote peace everywhere in musical mode, irresistible; I liked.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
This speaks the call and conveying the message of peace across the world and the diplomatic endeavour to promote peace everywhere in musical mode, irresistible; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya