The Warmth of Your Heart
High hopes and happiness mostly freestyle28 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written with great descriptive content theme and imagery the problem is there is no punctuations throughout the entire written piece there are no, as they are for pauses there is no periods or exclamations so it lacks proper grammar the grammar then would be considered a trocious and a course I don't normally grade and take Stars away for for that but in this particular case I figured it could help your writings and advanced you so keep on trying talk to Ricky 1024 Still Creek preaching to the choir here at Fan story number one National League World recognized writer for the year 2012 and 13 by Covington's who's who also being considered for number one righter world this year by strathmore's number to who's who who put me on and within the first 100 pages with premium lifetime membership
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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This was well written with great descriptive content theme and imagery the problem is there is no punctuations throughout the entire written piece there are no, as they are for pauses there is no periods or exclamations so it lacks proper grammar the grammar then would be considered a trocious and a course I don't normally grade and take Stars away for for that but in this particular case I figured it could help your writings and advanced you so keep on trying talk to Ricky 1024 Still Creek preaching to the choir here at Fan story number one National League World recognized writer for the year 2012 and 13 by Covington's who's who also being considered for number one righter world this year by strathmore's number to who's who who put me on and within the first 100 pages with premium lifetime membership
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very lovely romantic poem you've penned, my friend. This line is so pretty:
"May you dance among the stars
The moon hold you in its light "
Nice job! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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This is a very lovely romantic poem you've penned, my friend. This line is so pretty:
"May you dance among the stars
The moon hold you in its light "
Nice job! ~Kerry
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thak=nk you for reading my poem and for your kind review.
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Your welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Delahay
How nice to read your freestyle of writing. I easily got you happy message how I should feel even when I'm already old--
May life protect and keep you
On its long and lonely road
May your treasure be happiness
And you never grow old
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Smiles to you Delahay
How nice to read your freestyle of writing. I easily got you happy message how I should feel even when I'm already old--
May life protect and keep you
On its long and lonely road
May your treasure be happiness
And you never grow old
Gert
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading my poem. I do like to hear what people like about what I've written. I appreciate the feedback.
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Smiles Delahay
You are welcome
Gert
Comment from RGstar
The simplest thoughts of love are always the best and the most worth. Love has a way of belonging to innocence and virtues, and most are usually the simplest.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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The simplest thoughts of love are always the best and the most worth. Love has a way of belonging to innocence and virtues, and most are usually the simplest.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Teri7
This is truly a six star, beautiful and happy poem you have penned. I am so glad I read it this morning. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. It made me think of someone in love forever, not just for one day! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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This is truly a six star, beautiful and happy poem you have penned. I am so glad I read it this morning. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. It made me think of someone in love forever, not just for one day! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and your generous review. I appreciate your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day my friends.
Fantastic work. I'm always happy to read a post from you and I'm very pleased I caught this one. Yes, it is a tad different for you, but as you say, it's light and warm and I need that like all of us sometimes.
I loved the rhymes, whether intentional or not lol.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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G'day my friends.
Fantastic work. I'm always happy to read a post from you and I'm very pleased I caught this one. Yes, it is a tad different for you, but as you say, it's light and warm and I need that like all of us sometimes.
I loved the rhymes, whether intentional or not lol.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Fez for your kind words. It's always good to hear from you.
Comment from Possummagic
This is a lovely romantic poem. If as you say , this is not your usual style, perhaps you should change style because this is beautiful. It flows nicely and is well structured. PM
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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This is a lovely romantic poem. If as you say , this is not your usual style, perhaps you should change style because this is beautiful. It flows nicely and is well structured. PM
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review. I don't know if I could keep up the lighter style but I will try sometimes.
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You're welcome.PM
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a very sweet poem. It leaves the reader with a warm, fuzzy feeling. You accomplished your goal (going for cheeful and light). Your poem is uplifting and makes the reader smile. "You'll find my door always open, should you need a place to be" is my favorite part. A very sweet poem! ~~ Connie
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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This is a very sweet poem. It leaves the reader with a warm, fuzzy feeling. You accomplished your goal (going for cheeful and light). Your poem is uplifting and makes the reader smile. "You'll find my door always open, should you need a place to be" is my favorite part. A very sweet poem! ~~ Connie
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from patcelaw
Wonderfully worded and resented beautifully. I am with you, all that is going on in the world it is nice to have some light works of poetry. Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Wonderfully worded and resented beautifully. I am with you, all that is going on in the world it is nice to have some light works of poetry. Patricia
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Delahay
= Lovely poem, and even though you went for free style, it has a great rhythm to it.
= The rhyming is well done, it read smooth.
= Nicely penned and presented.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Delahay
= Lovely poem, and even though you went for free style, it has a great rhythm to it.
= The rhyming is well done, it read smooth.
= Nicely penned and presented.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and for your kind review.
