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Comment from closetpoetjester
Great poem M...you always manage to make me read you at least twice for good measure. I swear I get a different meaning nearly everytime I read one of your poems as you manage to elude and hint towards something but do you really? LOL
A girl has to wonder, right?
Right.
Great stuff. Nice to see your nib restored...although seldom seen here these days haha
Sassy
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Great poem M...you always manage to make me read you at least twice for good measure. I swear I get a different meaning nearly everytime I read one of your poems as you manage to elude and hint towards something but do you really? LOL
A girl has to wonder, right?
Right.
Great stuff. Nice to see your nib restored...although seldom seen here these days haha
Sassy
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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my nib...?
I didnt know my nibble was missing. may I borrow your ear....
you will not believe the mixture of manure Ive been maneuvering through
I mean I dont know why no one gives me any medals ...or even gold...its its its a crime. Hey Sassy...-smile-....
can we check on my tongue now...? Always Michael
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I'm sure your tongue is just fine. Not sure where I put my stethescope today
Nib = Pen
MMmmmmissing nibble? I like the sound of that haha
Dr Sassafrassy
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Comment from RGstar
SIX STAR RATING
Oh, my word. Sorry missed this early. I have been absent, came back to post, and easing back now. I have missed you, my dear friend, and how so you do not disappoint me with this. Wish I could have supported in real time.
In your unique style, a beautiful write, easily understood, even for those not familiar. I find much, much, pleasure, always, reading from your work. So good to see you still here for this encourages me to stay.
Beautiful work. Hope to see this next month as one of the entries for Poem of the Month.
Best wishes. Five stars are all I have.
RG
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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SIX STAR RATING
Oh, my word. Sorry missed this early. I have been absent, came back to post, and easing back now. I have missed you, my dear friend, and how so you do not disappoint me with this. Wish I could have supported in real time.
In your unique style, a beautiful write, easily understood, even for those not familiar. I find much, much, pleasure, always, reading from your work. So good to see you still here for this encourages me to stay.
Beautiful work. Hope to see this next month as one of the entries for Poem of the Month.
Best wishes. Five stars are all I have.
RG
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hey Friend...-smile-
ah but your support is timeless...when a champion headnods acknowledment you know youve earned where you belong. I'm not here in wonder anymore Roy. I know now. thank you.
I dont let the pettiness of people effect me like it use to. I post when I feel it...for me...sometimes for another...but not for conformation. my minds eye is my own now and not for sale for acceptance or rejection. I am either way....and so are you. Always Michael
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Well said, my friend, well said...we learn in all ways, and as you know, there's not much that can ruffle my wngs except own scratching.
Glad you are here, for oyu are quality...and that is the ingredients needed for my stay.
have a good day my brother.
Comment from Oatmeal
RECONCILED,
Your arrangement here is very creative. Very well reflected thoughts and opinions. Expressiveness is working well. The theme is strong. The flow is smooth. All thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.
The artwork is awesome.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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RECONCILED,
Your arrangement here is very creative. Very well reflected thoughts and opinions. Expressiveness is working well. The theme is strong. The flow is smooth. All thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.
The artwork is awesome.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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hey...-smile-
why thank you most of my admirers are secret...
I've often wonder if I were James Bond in the outskirts of a foreign land named amnesia. do you love me...? always Michael
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is such a lovely poem, my friend, very beautiful, thanks for adding the video along with it. The picture is stunning as well. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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This is such a lovely poem, my friend, very beautiful, thanks for adding the video along with it. The picture is stunning as well. ~Kerry
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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hey...-smile-.....why thanks , glad you enjoyed. always Michael
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello reconciled
what ever Impressed you to write your beautiful poem along with the gorgeous picture of the humming bird and this part
surreal seems almost home
manna sweet footprints my feet closer to...
seldom sees her
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hello reconciled
what ever Impressed you to write your beautiful poem along with the gorgeous picture of the humming bird and this part
surreal seems almost home
manna sweet footprints my feet closer to...
seldom sees her
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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a woman named life.
hey Gert...thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed. always Michael
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Smiles reconciled
Gert
Comment from Lucian Carter
This is a deep poem, deep enough to fall into. I go over it and over it and it could mean so many things it's hard to alight on one. That's not a complaint. I like poetry that makes me wonder, speculate and question. This did a great job of that.
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This is a deep poem, deep enough to fall into. I go over it and over it and it could mean so many things it's hard to alight on one. That's not a complaint. I like poetry that makes me wonder, speculate and question. This did a great job of that.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
Comment from Joan E.
What a striking picture--it could have inspired your poem, but knowing you, the inspiration was from within! I could easily visualize the beautify image of the "windows full of virgin snow". Cheers- Joan
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What a striking picture--it could have inspired your poem, but knowing you, the inspiration was from within! I could easily visualize the beautify image of the "windows full of virgin snow". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
Comment from papa55mike
What a great job of writing this poem and the picture is wonderful. Love can sometimes be fleeting like a hummingbird landing on a finger.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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What a great job of writing this poem and the picture is wonderful. Love can sometimes be fleeting like a hummingbird landing on a finger.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
Comment from His Grayness
Certainly, this is a beautifully presented work right from the outset and throughout the entire work. The writing and script is greatly thought-provoking and curious, requiring much focused consideration. I enjoyed this work very much and cannot offer any suggestions to improve it in any way! HIS GRAYNESS
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Certainly, this is a beautifully presented work right from the outset and throughout the entire work. The writing and script is greatly thought-provoking and curious, requiring much focused consideration. I enjoyed this work very much and cannot offer any suggestions to improve it in any way! HIS GRAYNESS
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
Comment from emptypage
I'm not a poet. I pretend to be for a contest now and then, but everyone knows I'm just messing with it.
You are a poet. I really love this piece. The cadence of the poem was the best part for me. I could practically tap my toes to it, which is always a good sign. Good luck,.
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I'm not a poet. I pretend to be for a contest now and then, but everyone knows I'm just messing with it.
You are a poet. I really love this piece. The cadence of the poem was the best part for me. I could practically tap my toes to it, which is always a good sign. Good luck,.
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
