Reviews from

Excuses Not Allowed

Need for aid.

23 total reviews 
Comment from Gert sherwood
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Perfect one linear Charlie

When disaster strikes,
take action
don't blame,
its an negative attitude
what is needed aren't just words
But, a positive attitude to take action

Gert

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review, comments and stars, Gert. Charlie
reply by Gert sherwood on 11-Oct-2017
    You are so welcome Charlie
    Gert
Comment from Eliane Rabello
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi Charlie,

Just passing by Fanstory and came across your one-line poem. I found it so to the point and interesting that took the time to review. I just wanted to say this struck a chord on many levels. I couldn't agree more. Congrats on coming up with something that, though simple, is so true and up-to-dated.

Cheers,

Eliane

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review, comments and stars, Eliane. Charlie
Comment from GWHARGIS
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It's the way of the world to lay blame. Gives anger and judgement a focal point. But your words are true. Thankfully, the world has a lot of people who take action. Great one line poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Gretchen. Charlie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Oh yes my friend action is definitely needed so many forget this and look for somebody to blame sometimes wasting valuable time well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Jill. Charlie
Comment from TAB_that's me
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Indeed we need action, not blame. We all need to come together in times of disaster. Great one-liner and good luck in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Tab. Charlie
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Charlie. You are such a multi talented individual! I agree totally with this one. Whenever we find a bad situation, there should be immediate action and a plan in place to sort things out and then much much later anything else that needs to be handled can be! Great write and good luck. xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Deborah. Charlie
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Oh, how true, Charlie. In today's world, we fail to act because we are so busy placing blame. We need to get it right before our boat is permanently sunk. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Debbie. Charlie
Comment from Joan E.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for your succinct and absolutely accurate observation about the correct way to respond to a disaster. The artwork you selected reinforces your message in a very compelling manner. Sighs, but best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Joan. Charlie
Comment from Curly Girly
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Action is true First-Aid.
Therefore, I think this is a wise and true statement in your one-line poem:
When disaster strikes, action, not blame, is needed.
Well done, Charlie.
Nicole

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments, Nicole. Charlie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Action is always a good thing, but sometimes, action isn't the correction thing. It goes back if you give man a fish, he will eat one meal, but if you teach him to fish he can eat forever. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your review, comments and stars, Barbara. Charlie